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Puppet_MeisterLv44yr
2020-04-22 05:23

The story is good but the things I like the most are the pacing. The story is not too fast nor too slow, it's moderate. I already read many novels in WN but the MC usually gets stronger too fast while for some reason his/her enemies would still catch up to MC level when MC has his own lucky encounter and cheating system/cultivation while his/her enemies only cultivating in their home. Overall, I like this story, keep it up, author! More chapters, please!

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Nicah26Lv13

Good story such a fantasy the more like it

Nicah26Lv13

Good story such a fantasy the more like it

Nicah26Lv13

Good story such a fantasy the more like it

Nicah26Lv13

Good story such a fantasy the more like it

Nicah26Lv13

Good story such a fantasy the more like it

Nicah26Lv13

Good story such a fantasy the more like it

Nicah26Lv13

Good story such a fantasy the more like it

Hati_3317Lv4

i think we might have gotten it the first time buddy

Sheena_VaughnLv1

Mhm its a good book

Soleil_AtkinsLv1

I know right

Alice_1478Lv4

Truly a well written review and it‘s most important fact „More chapters, please!“

blossomflowerLv3

This story is great

MblazikenLv12

The pacing is great!

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JinzouLv12

one of the best FMC cultivation novel i have read so far

Haku_OuroborosLv11

Yuri?

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