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slayte
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I wanted to give this 5 stars I really did but it was getting pretty ridiculous with op or author ex machina it was I don't know just ha ha instant power up o I'm done with this life even more powa really nice novel I just hope you can go back and rewrite it with a more fleshed out plot instead of so much wish fulfilment I do have to say if you ever rewrite this I will gladly reread

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Naruto: The Dovah-nin

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I am writing a new story btw. It has a better plot. But it will take a few weeks. It's titled Fear the Unknown. This one was just a small practice.