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2020-04-08 06:07

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I will try to be as objective as possible. My definition of "perfect / perfect" is to do your best on the subject. Since I consider that nothing is "perfect" in the whole definition of the word and I consider that it is subjective. First: The writing quality definitely deserves 5 stars because even though it is not perfect 4 at least you can see that the author tries to edit his chapters (which most of them do not) that tells me that he dedicates love and dedication to his writing for that reason I don't give it 4 if not 5. Second: Even though the general idea of ​​the story is not new (at least for me) there are not many stories of this type, just for that reason I give the construction of the world 3 stars, now it is not perfect but the author tries to innovate In some things, not being so cliche and not filling so much for that simple fact I give it 4 stars. However, the author is quite ingenious, he even used mel gibson and made me look for him to see if what he said was true or not (you can think that it happens in all novels and no, the fact that you enter such data and that the reader You are curious to look for this data is an achievement in itself) therefore 5 stars. Third: The characters, even though I can't talk much about them, are developing more than well for now, they are true to themselves, the changes are not forced or because "I reincarnated in my younger self, my hormones control me even if I have a mind of 65 years ". And not only the protagonist but the other characters are quite concise in themselves, at least for now 5 stars for it. (Subject to update) Fourth: The update frequency as you can see on the publication date of the chapters is quite bad, to the point that some people thought it was abandoned, therefore I will give it 3 stars (subject to update) Overall it is a novel that I found today, added it to my library today, and finished the chapters available today. It was very interesting and entertaining, definitely a light read to pass enough time. However I urge the author to focus on this novel, even though it is my personal opinion his other 2 novels are not half as good as this one. Of course I hope not to offend or say it with that intention, for my part I will give my power stones to this novel, I will leave it in my library and I will hope that it is updated regularly.

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