Look, I am also an author and I know how long it takes to write a chapter, and each chapter here is relatively long so way to go author. But, there is a problem with this story. It’s not terribly written, it’s just that it is basically narrating the entire one piece anime, it feels like I am literally watching the anime in this fanfic, and that’s a bad thing. Author, we don’t want to read what we already know. Don’t be afraid to take risks, change the plot line, don’t make the MC a mere spectator. The MC is just a side character that travels with the straw hat crew but barely does anything, even though he has future knowledge about the plot line. Now he does change the plot line a little bit, like when he stole a devil fruit from Enel, or when he destroyed a buster call. But that’s basically about it. He also does nerf the MC even when he has a system and an OP devil fruit. I believe that this author has the talent to make an incredible story, but it’s being wasted. And even though he did say that the MC will become independent, it’s just taking too long and I don’t see why he just doesn’t leave the straw-hats and become independent already. Most of the readers, including me, are just bored because it’s an exact copy of the anime. And most of us are losing interest in the story including me.
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Please suggest any good fanfictions. A fanfiction in which MC does not hesitate to change the plotline to suit his plans and schemes. A fanfiction where MC prefers to journey/adventure independently from Canon plotline, not caring about messing plotline or butterfly effect.
Well killer of mc’s is one.
St_Pat:Please suggest any good fanfictions. A fanfiction in which MC does not hesitate to change the plotline to suit his plans and schemes. A fanfiction where MC prefers to journey/adventure independently from Canon plotline, not caring about messing plotline or butterfly effect.
