A solid premise, standard fare in Chinese novels centered towards a female audience, the writing is a bit rough around the edges but acceptable, the plot from where I have read to is still in its infant stages, It has potential but needs to be developed, into a hopefully unique manner. Im a guy if you couldn't tell but I'm omnivorous in my consumption of all literature, some suggestions would be to read novels such as (Genius Doctor: Black Belly Miss), (7th young Miss) (The Good-for-Nothing Seventh Miss) and (Mesmerizing Ghost Doctor) some of my favorites and learn from them and develop an even more amazing story.
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