Review Detail of RenuKakkar in SPRING LOVERS: We who are inseperable

I like the story and went on to read 8 chapters. It is a nice romance story with a hospital setting. The plot seems interesting plot. World background is excellently described. Character design is equally great. Stability of updates is good too. The story is developing nicely. Writing quality is good too. There are a few grammatical errors. I would suggest that you run the written chapter in draft stage, through an online grammar checker. It will take care of the spellings, the punctuation etc. I am also using it. All the best Authors! I am saying authors as there are two people writing this novel.