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Review Detail of Beniiboy23 in One Step At A Time (DanMachi)

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It has good elements to it....just cant seem to enjoy it cause its edgelord,cringy mc....i mean get it has trauma dies...but its exatly the fun part in reincarnation novels that they can begin with clean state of life and do grand or not so grand things...an mc that doubts every move he/she makes is unappiling , deterring get it that someone doesnt just forget everything bad ...but in this premise mc should have improved because less expectation in other world 1st wish compensated parents so even if he doesnt forget them doesnt have to feel guilty for something that was not his fault....and with nk one to answer to in the otherworld it would be more of a freed bird personality in my opinion ,not this emo wannabee...sry for blabering :P

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One Step At A Time (DanMachi)

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You're kinda right...and that part of his is on the road to recovery...he won't be making the same mistakes he unknowingly and unintentionally used to make... Although, It will take time for him to turn into the 'perfect' MC. But hey... it's One Step At a Time.