After many chineesee fica i have just one sentence :D licking dog :D kills anyone moment meets main cast he miracously not xdd trash

Op in dodging ^^ boring...

I dont like other alteregos...otherwise great story

Clones are really outtadet....can puke when any story has them...(expect naruto)

Thanks god i didnt start reading it :D

At this point just every cliche happened... :D gets boring real quick

Ye cai doesnt shot because thiis ecause thaat :D great character really..:D at least stay with hella then.. :D kniw its mtljust stating facts

Its good , but at this pace its 3ch a month...no hope for fic

Trash their pride :D make it so that the training they done seems like waste of time :D show them that whitout sacred gear they are nothing :D he has to anyway fight them cause draig and tiamat has to renaunce their titles :D if you take away their powers that they think its theirs you can make them despair a bit and make their so called value dropp drastically in the eyes of the supernatural so that their pride shatters that fits punishment :D in line with the character :D later you can unseal or give them their gears back :D

Boring..... .

At this point i wonder how someone can still get exited for clones :D its so overused its not even funny :D

I hate leaving things halfway..like who would leave a girl he is dating ...for months whitout even checking up..its marvel not anime where 20 years pass and still same love and feelings when they first met ...complicating things that take a day in real life ..his father, Oaa ,ironman and all is confusing if its flashed out in 8-10 chapters no real content and months pass ..

Well the quality realllyyy decreased :D deacresed to nothing alltohether :D

Its common :D authors hate mothers :D you cant be edgy enough whitout sacrificing at least one loved one ,but the more the better....:D pretty pathetic :D

Like every restart :D i have absolutly 0 expectations :D

So i still dont get it where he stands at in the power level side :D his strengh in phisychal fitness haki and the sort :D cause vice admiral level strengh will be canonfodder after time skip :D three disaster level would be neesed to keep his organisation floating

This one chapter is much more interesting than the whole story so far this line of flexing and comlicated thought of others are the right choice for development

I enjoy this fic , but its getting annoying that you promote harry potter fic every chapter first finish this than surely everyone who likes this fic will read your hp fic later happily

Really short chap

I dont think they are this fic has like 10ch left and than stops likely