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Review Detail of RenuKakkar in WAR-Destiny of Future

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RenuKakkar
RenuKakkarLv54yrRenuKakkar

This is a nice story. The character design and the world background are excellent. The story is developing well. The stability of updates is going well too. The writing quality is good too. I would suggest that you write shorter paragraphs (Something that was advised to me too) as well as punctuation. For that I wold suggest to run the draft chapter through an online grammar checker before publishing it. All the best!

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WAR-Destiny of Future

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Thanks for the review