Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in WAR-Destiny of Future

My word.. A remarkable effort. The gigantic walls of text. Might want to break up some of the bigger text blocks for more reading clarity. Can't sometimes understand when one character stops speaking and another one starts. But for all it's faults, it's still an enjoyable read. And clearly you have a lot of plans and stuff left to write. Improvement comes with time, just keep on writing 👍