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TheMarquis
TheMarquisLv44yr
2020-07-16 17:42

Premise is fine but plot is rushed and very little is explained, everything goes downhill after the author introduces these two women who’s mere presence alone turns the mc into the biggest cuck you’ve ever seen. It is at that point in the story (around chapter 15-16) you start to notice the quality getting worse with the wish fulfillment from the author going through the roof. Nothing makes sense anymore and it’s best to stop reading. To gain a better understanding of just how bad it gets, read other negative reviews for more info, when it comes to this story I really couldn’t be bothered to write more than this.

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Ice_Sovereign
Ice_SovereignLv12

Damn you're absolutely right 😂 and he got just dump the other.

shadowstriker102
shadowstriker102Lv14

The book was chosen..... Fck my life

onlynothing
onlynothingLv3

Man how many times has your life been ****ed in this book alone? : v Don't get me wrong I just found it funny

shadowstriker102:The book was chosen..... Fck my life
shadowstriker102
shadowstriker102Lv14

Uncountable times and if you have read my review for this book you can see why i dont like it and didnt want it to be chosen.

onlynothing:Man how many times has your life been ****ed in this book alone? : v Don't get me wrong I just found it funny
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