Review Detail of Sigheti in dust to dust ashes to ashes this is dropped sigh

While staying loyal to a premise that has been executed quite often, the author presents us with a tale that grasps the imagination. Although the storyline is clear and presented in a style that speaks for the author’s passion for writing, I have yet to truly define the protagonist. He feels sympathetic but I fail to imagine him and therefore he does not genuinely grasp my interest. The dialogue could use some work. It feels forced and unnatural rather than genuine, although I realise that the quality increases towards more recent chapters. Overall it is a story that contains a lot of potential, even with the slight imperfections.