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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv45yr
2020-03-13 19:07

This is epic but kinda seems pointless and stupid....here me out.... the MC dosnt know anything important....he dosnt have any knowledge about the OOTP [it hasnt been shown...I mean dude didnt even know bills wife]....he dosnt have any knowledge regarding the prophesy/ horcruxes/ etx....so him going back in time seems pointless, he is just a side character .....but it is interesting.... if you get over the pointless MC...its cool cause here we have an MC whilst he dosnt have any knowledge he has other types of knowledge..cause he was a criminal.. suggestion: dont make MC a naive idiot that dives headfirst into confrontations, or tell others he is from the future...make him smart and cool not an idiot........make him OP...like beyond everyone...dude has over a decade of preparation time, and dont neuter him Add some romance and fluff...just build it. **; no bash but honestly hufflepuffs are useless....loyalty my ass....those cunts betrayed HP during second year...and the 4 th year......no benefit of the doubt was given to him despite him being their savior,,,,all of em thought he was the heir or was cheating..and too anyone that says that they helped harry during the war...well duh!...they were against a being that wanted them destroyed...many puffs werent purebloods.....point is, at the end of the day the puffs are worthless cunts that are basically useless, they were sheep that couldnt stand up for themselves.......[cedrick, didnt even help harry by giving him a clue about the dragon]......just my opinion

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Weirdo
WeirdoLv6

I agreed... Even when he didn't have any knowledge of Canon sh1t because he's a fodder, at least make him OP or at least catch up to his previous prowess in shorter time and may or may not avoid the war by playing the fool and get the fck out... I would even train harder than paranoid Moody if I was him... Then when the sh1t stuff start, I know I would at least survive by running away from all those sh1t or survive the war...

bloo
blooLv14

Heavily disagree. People who are hesitating to read from this review should defo give this a read. This story doesn't follow canon. There's no room of requirements abusing. No fucking Hermione romancing for the 1000th time... No "Evil Dumbledore" stupidity. This is one of the most entertaining stories. And you're insane if you don't think the MC is OP. He's already got a fully functional secret society of wizards going. This guy is set up to be the next Voldemort for gods sake!

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

Oi !.....never said MC was not OP....never said so was ****.....just said it was pointless but also interesting...ie: MC from the future but has no " important " knowledge BUT still has " knowledge " on other things

bloo:Heavily disagree. People who are hesitating to read from this review should defo give this a read. This story doesn't follow canon. There's no room of requirements abusing. No fucking Hermione romancing for the 1000th time... No "Evil Dumbledore" stupidity. This is one of the most entertaining stories. And you're insane if you don't think the MC is OP. He's already got a fully functional secret society of wizards going. This guy is set up to be the next Voldemort for gods sake!
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

also I said story was epic.....so yah...your opinion is yours but dont discredit mine by some some sense less ****

bloo:Heavily disagree. People who are hesitating to read from this review should defo give this a read. This story doesn't follow canon. There's no room of requirements abusing. No fucking Hermione romancing for the 1000th time... No "Evil Dumbledore" stupidity. This is one of the most entertaining stories. And you're insane if you don't think the MC is OP. He's already got a fully functional secret society of wizards going. This guy is set up to be the next Voldemort for gods sake!
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

even gave it 4.5 stars....dumbass... might sound irritated cause its due to the isolation

bloo:Heavily disagree. People who are hesitating to read from this review should defo give this a read. This story doesn't follow canon. There's no room of requirements abusing. No fucking Hermione romancing for the 1000th time... No "Evil Dumbledore" stupidity. This is one of the most entertaining stories. And you're insane if you don't think the MC is OP. He's already got a fully functional secret society of wizards going. This guy is set up to be the next Voldemort for gods sake!
bloo
blooLv14

Overreact much? Lmao. I said I disagreed with what you said. Is that not allowed or something? Where did you see me discredit you? Smh. Read my comment again then look at how you reacted dude. You flipped out like I insulted your ancestors.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

you just said i said something and yet everything you said about what I said was wrong....what do you expect?

bloo:Overreact much? Lmao. I said I disagreed with what you said. Is that not allowed or something? Where did you see me discredit you? Smh. Read my comment again then look at how you reacted dude. You flipped out like I insulted your ancestors.
bloo
blooLv14

Even if it was (it wasn't). That still doesn't call for your attitude. Dude you've got anger issues if that's the reaction you have to someone disagreeing.

amaturewriter:you just said i said something and yet everything you said about what I said was wrong....what do you expect?
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

again why do you think I am angry?..at best I am annoyed, annoyed at you saying something which I didnt say

bloo:Even if it was (it wasn't). That still doesn't call for your attitude. Dude you've got anger issues if that's the reaction you have to someone disagreeing.
bloo
blooLv14

You argue like my ex. You tryna tell me you weren't angry? Smh. Some people just feed of internet fights I guess. I'm done replying

amaturewriter:again why do you think I am angry?..at best I am annoyed, annoyed at you saying something which I didnt say
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

dude just read my comment and tell me where I was angry,,,I just called you an diot and dumbass thats it, hell in the comment I called you dumbass ever wet down and read what was there?....look IDK why you think I am angry.....you just misinterpret ****, and sound so needy, maybe thats why your chick left ya.... yes... I annoyed,,,,not angry

bloo:You argue like my ex. You tryna tell me you weren't angry? Smh. Some people just feed of internet fights I guess. I'm done replying
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

That is the worst kind of time travel. The ones where the MC literally doesn't know anything or magically forgets everything later on.

Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5

You gave it 3.5 fucking dumbass....check first before writing...

amaturewriter:even gave it 4.5 stars....dumbass... might sound irritated cause its due to the isolation
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

my bad....

Legendary_Person:You gave it 3.5 fucking dumbass....check first before writing...
Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5

I enjoyed your riser fanfic you restart it....

amaturewriter:my bad....
Legendary_Person
Legendary_PersonLv5

I enjoyed your riser fanfic you restart it....

amaturewriter:my bad....
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

bru heres what happened...I have the ideas but I cant put it to words....like thats what I am trying to fix.....i'll try to continue...but so far I re-read my **** and its kinda similar to other dxd FF's only thing different is the relationships are build instead of the cliche ****.BUT its super cringe...i'll try to fix it

Legendary_Person:I enjoyed your riser fanfic you restart it....
Senior_Kill_Streak
Senior_Kill_StreakAuthor

Hey Author here, let's just try to relax okay? We're all here because we love Harry Potter. 😁

50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

Then continue your Harry Potter one. You ended it at a part where it was getting really good

amaturewriter:bru heres what happened...I have the ideas but I cant put it to words....like thats what I am trying to fix.....i'll try to continue...but so far I re-read my **** and its kinda similar to other dxd FF's only thing different is the relationships are build instead of the cliche ****.BUT its super cringe...i'll try to fix it
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

actually read it.....its quite dope...like fist 3 chps might be annoying, then on it actually gets good

David_Drake:That is the worst kind of time travel. The ones where the MC literally doesn't know anything or magically forgets everything later on.
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Hey, everyone. It's the author. I wanted to thank everyone who posted a review. They are really encouraging even the ones with the bad ratings. 😁 Anyway, I wanted to use this review to talk about what made me start writing this. First of all, I love the world of Harry Potter. I think we all shame that. But, there are certain things in it that really make me raise my eyebrows. I was watching the Deathly Hallows part 1 for the first time in maybe 6 years, and I saw one of the early scenes in it. In the scene, Voldemort was levitating Charity Burbage above a table with the inner circle of Death Eaters around it. Then Voldemort killed her because she had suggested that it was okay to associate or mate with muggles/muggleborns. And I was, like, did I really watch this when I was younger? They killed her like a pest and fed her to Nagini. Before dying, she pleaded with Snape, "Severus, please... we're friends." But he only looked at her silently. What if they were really friends? Its not impossible, they were colleagues for many years and she used his first name. But, Snape had made the sacrifice for the Greater Good. It was messed up. So, I started tningking how could an outsider change the HP world for the better. In truth, it was kinda simple. With power, influence, wealth anyone could do it. You don't need the Elder Wand or the Room of Requirement. But why did Dumbledore not do it? Even though he had all the tools. It was because he was too passive. He had too much faith in the good of people. So, I needed an MC that had seen the degraded side of society. Any muggleborn could probably be that person, but no one had any real chance to do it. So, I sent Alex back in time for his chance. And there we have it.

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