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Ok so since I'm the author of course I will give myself a whopping 5 stars because of obvious reasons and because I jus love my work....really good job me u did a great job.đ
I played russian novel roulette and I didn't need to grab the eye bleach but instead gently pick up the 40lbs budha statue that i rub for good luck on occasion, then the 35lbs bejeweled toad statue with a heavy bronze coin it it's mouth, and finally the tiny jade dragon that I may or may not misremember owning or pilfering from an aunt visiting when I was 8. It's that fake jade, like really caustic resin ones you get at a swap meet. Pretty sure if I bust up the statues I'll either get a lot of money, a trip to the clink, or crushed childhood memories. Anyway the MC is fun and the plot a twist of something familiar. It's my cup of tea and all I'll say is give it a try and ignore my random bouts of word diarrhea.
The pace of the story is good, I liked how you setted up the world background. MC's personallity is okay too, a clever and smart guy. But your novel sucks as **** in writing quality, making it almost unreadable, as i have to reformulate entire phrashes in my head just to understand what's going on, almost looks like MTL. I tried to give it a try but couldn't withstand it, good luck xD
Love the story hate the writing its so odd to read that I have to read the same sentence a few times but once I've got the idea I'm happy as can be.
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Just because. I haven't even started to read yet, lol. But going by your other novel, this must be as good or even better! Love ya my dude.
Bro i love this **** its so damn good hope you continue you it...... Plz continue man i reall like it ........................................
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[ DING ] [ Common Sense Hijack System Activated ] ---- That notification was the start of a whole new life for Karl. He who just used to be working at a convenience store and always getting annoying complaints from customers and some shady words from his manager. Become a totally free man who can flip common sense upside down! ****** Cover by AI ------ Support Me By Gifts or Power Stones -----