Item: The Blessed
Rating: 3.8
Author: kaban

kabanLv144yr

2020-07-09 10:53

The pace of the story is good, I liked how you setted up the world background. MC's personallity is okay too, a clever and smart guy. But your novel sucks as **** in writing quality, making it almost unreadable, as i have to reformulate entire phrashes in my head just to understand what's going on, almost looks like MTL. I tried to give it a try but couldn't withstand it, good luck xD

The Blessed

Evrabonzz

4.8

28 Chs

Liked by 2 people

Replies2

EvrabonzzAuthor

Tnx, I guess. Well, this is my first novel, like what I said on the discription and in the auxiliary chapter that I don't have any experience in writing before this and English is not my main language, but for me, the writing style is... Yeah, a bit lame and sucks I guess, but for someone who doesn't have any experience or knows anything about writing etiquette, I guess I did good at least, and also when it comes to the grammar, I know the basics of English, like what you see right now but, not on the level of an expert or native English guy. but overall, I agree with your review and a bit not at the same time because, my writing quality is definitely not sucks as f*ck, that's quite a bit harsh not gonna lie, but if you hardly understand it, that you need to think some paragraphs over and over again in your mind just to fully understand it then I'm sorry I guess. I guess I never bother about it coz the review I'm getting so far is, "the grammar is not that bad", and no one are complaining about it until now. but I'm happy that you enjoy it, I hope you can come back in the future specially once I sign the contract since I will have my personal editor and by that time, I guess you can definitely have a good time in reading. That's all, have a nice day and tnx for the review again.

4yr

kabanLv14

Yeah, I was indeed quite harsh in my review mb :P, but keep up the good work. In the future i will give it a try again for sure ✌🏿

Evrabonzz:Tnx, I guess. Well, this is my first novel, like what I said on the discription and in the auxiliary chapter that I don't have any experience in writing before this and English is not my main language, but for me, the writing style is... Yeah, a bit lame and sucks I guess, but for someone who doesn't have any experience or knows anything about writing etiquette, I guess I did good at least, and also when it comes to the grammar, I know the basics of English, like what you see right now but, not on the level of an expert or native English guy. but overall, I agree with your review and a bit not at the same time because, my writing quality is definitely not sucks as f*ck, that's quite a bit harsh not gonna lie, but if you hardly understand it, that you need to think some paragraphs over and over again in your mind just to fully understand it then I'm sorry I guess. I guess I never bother about it coz the review I'm getting so far is, "the grammar is not that bad", and no one are complaining about it until now. but I'm happy that you enjoy it, I hope you can come back in the future specially once I sign the contract since I will have my personal editor and by that time, I guess you can definitely have a good time in reading. That's all, have a nice day and tnx for the review again.

4yr

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