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Finally Mahouka Koukou no Rettosei fanfic and very brilliant crossover one... 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

Yeah, another good fanfic, Character background is well built with a stable speed. Please don't drop.mahouka is one of my favorite anime, it was great to see the Mahouka fanfic.

Another power and violence equals right fanfiction. A hodgepodge of franchises trying hard to be original "pund intended", but comes of as un-original because it lacks deep and substance to stand on its own. Decent writing, interesting world background, but boring generic villain/hero character!?? Because family?

hmm if I would give a review of all the chapters I read, I would say that it started with the protagonist who has the obsession with having a family, for good or bad, to wake up his brothers he would do worse things than psychopaths xD, good start, good way to form your army and people of confidence, continuing with your plans to conquer gods in necklaces and looking for ways to strengthen and create artifacts for your brothers, making decisions for your benefit and the place where you are protecting, creating weapons xD, no I am a fan of the historical theme, but otherwise so far it is different, some who started reading from the beginning, would have been bored of waiting for the plot "mahouka no rettori" to begin. since the majority is used to seeing when a protagonist enters a world of his liking, he becomes strong and arms his most harem xD, that is my simple comment until chapter 85.

love the story has great world-building and can't wait for it to reach canon. Seeing how his presence has affected the word. There are a couple things that annoy me about the story thou, First is how come of the chapters seem really childish completely turning the mc's personality doing a 180. Like when he got minamoto to join with the three conditions for example. Another is how the Author bs's power of those around him. Like the sword guy. He SHOULD not compare to kiyo (vampire girl) but somehow you make it out like he is some sword god. It was said he was only human with only a slight boost. Okay yeah, so how tf does he beat her? There are limits... but then it seems that the Author makes uploads of bs. Personally I think its because the mc etc are op af and he made them to strong. Thus is increasing the power of everyone surrounding him even thou it makes no sense. (If it was a different world then yeah but this is meant to be Irregular highschool....) Also, like with that other immortal mage, how tf does he draw with the mc? By now the mc should be able to shake countries or continents at least and that's just his force powers... It makes no sense at all that he drew to him. It was explained that he had a "few centuries" on mc but then in millenniums centuries are nothing... then the home-field advantage is just pure bs. To me, it felt like the Author needed the mc to have a friend and no way would the mc make a friend in a random guy he just met. It felt forced for the plot if that makes sense ? Hope that doesn't continue as it kinda ruins the flow. Other than that, I PRAY when it comes to canon he doesn't go to school. It would make zero sense and ruin the fanfic to me. With things so far I just don't see it happening. Maybe creating the school where they all go, or even not owning it at all just visiting or looking on at all the major events. Would be nice to see how the main cast would react to him and the family. NOT HATING ON THE FANFIC. These are just my thoughts on reading and what I felt. Take from it what you will ^^

SOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOOOLLL,HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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So good!😍😍 I really enjoy reading this work I just hope you release more updates Hahaha😅😆 Quality✔️ Strong MC (and still getting stronger)✔️ No Horny harem seeking MC✔️ No naive and justice seeking MC✔️ Background✔️ Thanks for writing this. 🙇🙏 Please don't drop this.🙇🙏