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2020-06-12 15:22

Finally Mahouka Koukou no Rettosei fanfic and very brilliant crossover one... 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

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Aeternabilis
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love the story has great world-building and can't wait for it to reach canon. Seeing how his presence has affected the word. There are a couple things that annoy me about the story thou, First is how come of the chapters seem really childish completely turning the mc's personality doing a 180. Like when he got minamoto to join with the three conditions for example. Another is how the Author bs's power of those around him. Like the sword guy. He SHOULD not compare to kiyo (vampire girl) but somehow you make it out like he is some sword god. It was said he was only human with only a slight boost. Okay yeah, so how tf does he beat her? There are limits... but then it seems that the Author makes uploads of bs. Personally I think its because the mc etc are op af and he made them to strong. Thus is increasing the power of everyone surrounding him even thou it makes no sense. (If it was a different world then yeah but this is meant to be Irregular highschool....) Also, like with that other immortal mage, how tf does he draw with the mc? By now the mc should be able to shake countries or continents at least and that's just his force powers... It makes no sense at all that he drew to him. It was explained that he had a "few centuries" on mc but then in millenniums centuries are nothing... then the home-field advantage is just pure bs. To me, it felt like the Author needed the mc to have a friend and no way would the mc make a friend in a random guy he just met. It felt forced for the plot if that makes sense ? Hope that doesn't continue as it kinda ruins the flow. Other than that, I PRAY when it comes to canon he doesn't go to school. It would make zero sense and ruin the fanfic to me. With things so far I just don't see it happening. Maybe creating the school where they all go, or even not owning it at all just visiting or looking on at all the major events. Would be nice to see how the main cast would react to him and the family. NOT HATING ON THE FANFIC. These are just my thoughts on reading and what I felt. Take from it what you will ^^

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