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Not gonna lie….. in this chapter Louis is feeling like that one gay bestfriend who plans everything

You had me but then you lost me at the powers check-in. The is a Teen Wolf fanfic with a supernatural world not an apocalyptic marvel/dc universe….you just directly made him the strongest being on the planet. You need to stick to supernatural powers and not get carried away giving popular powers from every show that are overrated for such show. My recommendation would be not to bother with this teen wolf fanfic anymore and just do a fanfic where he’s in a world combined with DC AND MARVEL

You should included Glee from season 4/ Grey’s Anatomy / Suits/ Castle and 2 Broke Girls

Don’t let Cisco see his contacts…bro will go crazy

#1 is Stan Lee

Glad author saw my comments and recreated it

Ik this is for character development but I hope this doesn’t happen frequently because I hate pathetic characters

I was happy that a new Suits novel was uploaded but met disappointed before finishing the first chapter. Unfortunately it seems like you took points from those other deplorable Ai Suits novels to create this book and it shows. For instance, like all of them…you gave MC a system that causes physical overdraft when used for a long periods. Why was that even necessary and don’t say for balance or restrictions. Next the is the MC’s sudden savior complex where he believes it’s his responsibility to make up for past regrets in the show. The show ended perfectly and what difference would your character make by trying to stop the consequences of their actions. In reality it’s about a protagonist who simps for the show characters and does everything to help them, basically a self insert because you’re really on the plot revolving around the main characters to create chapters. Sadly fanfictions has clearly degraded to a point as authors don’t use their imagination to develop and expand creating new ideas anymore. You can create new characters, firms, law cases and especially developing a storyline plot for your character that doesn’t have any attachments to the Suits storyline.

It was out at 71 chapters before disappearing and returning as Hiatus. The story seems to be Ai developed as their is no description or age of the OC mikealson, only that his name is Soren and he’s very short. The dialogue around the siblings is repetitive with the same mentions of being ‘boring, funny, ruined pride’ throughout