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Ezy_Calliope
Ezy_CalliopeLv114yr
2020-06-19 20:38

ALL IN ALL THIS IS A CATCH IF YOU WANT A BREATH OF FRESH. NOT YOUR TYPICAL STORY. This is based on my readings till chapter 3. I think that this one has good starting point though cliche at start- the typical being betrayed by half-sister and abandoned by her family, I still believed that the rebirth + system + fantasy genre is interesting combination. This is book is also written by author of "Madam You have been Uncovered" so I think that overpowed MC and ML is to be expected. But there's the process from weak to strong unlike the other book which started with the MC being powerful enough. The only issue I have is that the author is fond of aloof characters. Which is bad because if the MC is so aloof it won't be relatable and will hinder readers to be engaged in the story. So you have to expect that the romance is well, hmmm... Ice block? Hahahaha they're both cold... and I just want to have real feelings being conveyed not some kind of boring romance. Well anyways I can't conclude the romance part but I hope a better one than "Madam you have been uncovered".

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Luci_Mader
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Ive read nothing

Ezy_Calliope
Ezy_CalliopeLv11

Now I can tell that both MC and ML are not block of ice. They're interactions are both sincere and warm. Slow romance yes. I don't know when are they going to progress but there's kind of budding dependence from the MC because ML became her guardian and slowly the ML is providing her everything she miss and yearned in her last life.

SomethingLikeDeSun
SomethingLikeDeSunLv2

Oh I really like the review you gave on this novel, you sound really experienced. I would appreciate it if you could read my book and review your thoughts. So far I have a few chapters so there is to much to read but I promise it’s pretty good.

Ezy_Calliope
Ezy_CalliopeLv11

Sure. What's the title?

SomethingLikeDeSun:Oh I really like the review you gave on this novel, you sound really experienced. I would appreciate it if you could read my book and review your thoughts. So far I have a few chapters so there is to much to read but I promise it’s pretty good.
BLOOPINGBLOOPER
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hi, im a new writer and id appreciate it if you read my book (i'm in love with my secret spy) and told me what I could do better. thanks! https://***.webnovel.com/book/i'm-in-love-with-my-secret-spy._17634460106068205

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