This story has a good potential, it had a good flow in the first chapter, but seem too fast and rushed as the story goes on without proper transition scene or any explanation, like suddenly she goes to the study and complete the mission, suddenly this Mr. jiang attracted to her, live together after first meet and giving phone afterward, like Why the hell a rich guy suddenly pop out of nowhere and become your sugar daddy after the first meet? even quick transmigration novel has better transition and flow, i don't know why people give this 5 star if the world background isn't even explained well (modern world, mental power, some influental family?), i'll try to read until 100 chapter and give review again, if it turned out to be good after these 60 chapter, i'll let you know.. if you like fast paced novel, i suggests to read quick transmigration novel like Coming of The Villain Boss, Side Character Transmigrations: The Final Boss is No Joke, Quick Transmigrating Second Female Lead’s Counterattack, etc
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LIKEIsnt it? There are way too many of these quick transmigration plots with the same op MC, unrealistic ML, dumb one dimensional villians that they seem to blend together. My only issue on this site is that most of the readers just seem to give everything five stars and Im here into the 50th chapter and Im yawning because I feel like Ive read atleast 50 of the same plot! Most of these plots are fine if they are your first transmigration novel but after 10? you just really over it and want something different. Ive lost count on the novels Ive been mislead into reading because nobody gave a real analysis of the novel but "so good! Strong MC!5 stars! The best outhere" and I read the novel and Im just like "Are you kidding me?!" So thanks to the parent comment for honesty.
hello, i'll try your book, but i have to warn you before that I'm an honest reader and reviewer 😉
you're right, it's hard to find a good book with all these spam or fake reviews every where, tell me if you find any good books that you recommend 😉