Item: Femme Fatale:The Queen Of Chess
Rating: 5
Author: LordSputnik

LordSputnikLv134yr

2020-02-08 20:46

Honest Review I would normally say this isn't my cup of tea, but I found myself enjoying this one surprisingly! Feels very unique in the flood of romance novels. The Good: Writing quality has improved significantly when comparing it to the author's earlier works. This shows they are willing to put time and effort in to their novels. The Bad: Very little can be said that is actually bad about this, if I had to pick I'd say that it feels like it is going to be similar to the author's other novels. On the other hand, if this kind of story is their passion then it is better to keep at it! The Neutral: Donut shaded rich gloss made me giggle because I can think of several different colors of donuts and not all of them are flattering. And did you mean lip gloss?

Femme Fatale:The Queen Of Chess

Aysel_Inara

4.7

292 Chs

Liked by 12 people

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Aysel_InaraAuthor

Ahh, it happens when you're writing without worries and concentrating into one plotline makes it improve significantly, thank you for keeping an eye on me and for guiding. ❤ As for the other thing, I'd try to make it 'sound' different from other kidnapping stuff and mafia things, because its mainly going to be a mystery & action rather excessive romance stuff.🤗 And for donut shaded gloss, I intended to show it some brown-pinkish, Oh, did I skip something?

4yr

LordSputnikLv13

I'm not sure if it was skipped, I was merely pointing out that it says "donut-shaded rich gloss" and was wondering if you meant lip gloss instead of rich gloss... I'm not very knowledgeable about makeup though so I am only going on what I think.

Aysel_Inara:Ahh, it happens when you're writing without worries and concentrating into one plotline makes it improve significantly, thank you for keeping an eye on me and for guiding. ❤ As for the other thing, I'd try to make it 'sound' different from other kidnapping stuff and mafia things, because its mainly going to be a mystery & action rather excessive romance stuff.🤗 And for donut shaded gloss, I intended to show it some brown-pinkish, Oh, did I skip something?

4yr

Aysel_InaraAuthor

Haha, I will tell you. Come.🤣🤣

LordSputnik:I'm not sure if it was skipped, I was merely pointing out that it says "donut-shaded rich gloss" and was wondering if you meant lip gloss instead of rich gloss... I'm not very knowledgeable about makeup though so I am only going on what I think.

4yr

Niya_SorellLv2

I didn’t expect that

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Cv_redrvnyLv2

Lol

4yr

Aysel_InaraAuthor

Oh, expect what?

Niya_Sorell:I didn’t expect that

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