Review Detail of Henrion in Breaking Limits: A DBZ Fan-fic

This isn't bad, but it's not good either. The writing quality is great, and it's updated frequently. There are a couple of things that drag the story down though. Firstly, the protagonist's progression. The protagonist is growing strong very fast, but that's not the main issue. She's quickly befriending characters, and getting things from them. Other that that, they have no effect on the plot. It makes them feel two dimensional, like their only purpose in the story is to make the protagonist stronger. Secondly, the romance feels rushed. There's very little chemistry between the protagonist and the main love interest. It became more common shortly before they started behaving intimately. I can see there was an attempt at making it gradual, but the change still felt sudden, and broke my immersion. This is a good way to pass the time, if you haven't got anything better to read. I'll continue reading it, since it's got potential. I hope it improves in the future.