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*manipulated their bodies The string fruit is powerful, but it can't control a person's mind, only their body.
They're finally caught up with the original. Nothing left to copy and paste. I'm guessing it'll be dropped. Shivam didn't credit Mister Grin, the real author, and they started chopping up chapters and dragging things out once they got close to the end. Probably just another run-of-the-mill plagiarist. Webnovel is full of em.
Shoko
Dragon Ball Online. A character, Tock, ate second form Frieza's tail, after it got chopped off by Krillin on namek. It allowed him to take on several of Frieza's traits and gave him a boost in power.
Like the rest of Aerle's "works," this is plagiarized for the purpose of promoting his p@- treon. The original is called "A Demon Lord's Hero," by Fahad09 on FF net. The original has 403k words. Check it out, and don't give your money to this thief.
This story is plagiarized. The original is called "A Precise Note" by "Sir Lucifer Morningstar," on ffn. This dude is just stealing content to advertise his p-treon. The original is at 119k words, so check out the original story, and don't give this dude any money.
The other reviews seem overwhelmingly positive, but none of them mention the pacing of the story. I only read a few chapters, but it was enough to get an idea of how this story was gonna go. The protagonists are complete Mary Sue's. While they're still toddlers, it's discovered that they're both naturals at the mind arts. At the age of 7, apparently, both protagonists are at the level of 7th year hogwarts students. We're never shown any training or learning, and they've not even received wands yet. They later receive legacy wands, not matched to them, so they should be less efficient and hard to use, but it doesn't really matter for them. Both are suddenly able to use corporeal patronuses. In just a few months, they both become the youngest animagi in history. That's where I decided to drop this story. Development is never shown. There's just short timeskips followed by boosts in power. What's the point of a story like this? Having a character become powerful is nice, but there's no satisfaction if we never get to witness the growth. I was interested because I've not seen many Grindlewald fics, but I'm incredibly disappointed with this.
Guess the ghost is gone for good now. I can't see any way for our protagonist to get it from the tower without an all-out assault. They're not gonna give away a dangerous tool to the hive, and they're not so incompetent that they'd lose it. They'll probably finish up examining it and destroy it before our protagonist reaches a level where he can reclaim it.
Idk about the comics, but in the MCU, Howard's death was purely Hydra's doing. The winter soldier killed him and stole a few doses of Erskine's serum.
The story is great, but this was plagiarized. The original story is called With the eyes of God. It was written by cloud9stories on ffn.
Dude has been with this group for years. I think they'll notice that he's suddenly started wearing turtle necks, and he's stopped going out during the day, right after his fight with the Vampire King. I hadn't even considered the physical changes he might go through. Even if his skin doesn't change, there's his teeth and his ears, possibly his eyes as well.
I will continue to worry. The humans have been preyed upon by monsters since the end of the war. Our protagonists aren't gonna get a heroes welcome now that they're vampires. Whether it's abandoning Chemy or getting chased out by the humans, tragedy is inevitable.