Review Detail of Skepparn in My Multiverse Trip
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Writing Quality: 4/5 Stability of Updates: 4/5 Story Development: 3/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background: 4/5 This story is one of better written fanfics on this site and the system is easily understandable yet quite advanced compared to others while the storyline feels a little too much of a copy paste of original so far it's good The one and only problem for the story is a massive one, the mc is absolute trash, there's no redeeming qualities from him so far at ch34 I really want to continue reading this but I can't, it's too frustrating seeing our mc having such a massive amount of resources available to him yet he acts like a fucking retard and fucks around and almost gets himself killed, let me guess, he'll look right into the basilisk eyes later just for the lols or something, that's how retarded he is, he threw a fucking rock cake on a troll and then proceeded to try to dodge the swings instead of you know actually using fucking magic
My Multiverse Trip
Ryan_Colman
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Hey I believe he was firing off magic while dodging trolls have magic immune skin and as for the basalisk part nope i already wrote and posted it as for the character development yeah I need to work on that a bit the copy and paste for the first and second book have pretty much ended after butterfly effect takes place now so I'm working on more freehand for book 3 and on its gunna get a bit darker more combat related more background plots and plans
Yeah it's true, but the part of 'retard MC' i kinda agree and you didn't have explanation about it. First of all about that passive skill 'Gamer Mind' that looks just like a decorations to you. The skill didn't work at all, he fainted just cause of what? Panic or Fear ? Laughable !! Fear of heights ?? Your passive skill is ridiculous. Gamer mind will suppress forcefully any Debuff effect that happen to the MC,like Fear ,Panic , Confusion ,etc.. Your MC contradict himself,he want to be prepared but didn't buy anything after get many gp he is stealing from US vault. -_- Hey you can buy many NP to keep it at your vault, to prepare for a rainy day,NP have many unique effect that can help you later such as Rule Breaker,Ro Aias,Avalon ,etc. Lastly rather than buy a cannon or Castle breaker or whatever,just learn some huge AOE magic from the shop god-damnit, Armageddon,Nilfheim,Megidoan etc.. He is too immature for someone that have been studying at University. Other than that is good, I'm arriving at chapter 91.
Ryan_Colman:Hey I believe he was firing off magic while dodging trolls have magic immune skin and as for the basalisk part nope i already wrote and posted it as for the character development yeah I need to work on that a bit the copy and paste for the first and second book have pretty much ended after butterfly effect takes place now so I'm working on more freehand for book 3 and on its gunna get a bit darker more combat related more background plots and plans
SaikoYonebayashi:Yeah it's true, but the part of 'retard MC' i kinda agree and you didn't have explanation about it. First of all about that passive skill 'Gamer Mind' that looks just like a decorations to you. The skill didn't work at all, he fainted just cause of what? Panic or Fear ? Laughable !! Fear of heights ?? Your passive skill is ridiculous. Gamer mind will suppress forcefully any Debuff effect that happen to the MC,like Fear ,Panic , Confusion ,etc.. Your MC contradict himself,he want to be prepared but didn't buy anything after get many gp he is stealing from US vault. -_- Hey you can buy many NP to keep it at your vault, to prepare for a rainy day,NP have many unique effect that can help you later such as Rule Breaker,Ro Aias,Avalon ,etc. Lastly rather than buy a cannon or Castle breaker or whatever,just learn some huge AOE magic from the shop god-damnit, Armageddon,Nilfheim,Megidoan etc.. He is too immature for someone that have been studying at University. Other than that is good, I'm arriving at chapter 91.
