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I still wonder when he will wise up and use cheap items like steel balls or cannon balls for the gate, cheap and sturdy and just as effective and harder to damage than swords.
It kind of annoys me how he doesn't think about the consequences of running away from the village so early, I mean without him Naruto would fail against Kaguya and then it's game over
not going to lie homie I wrote this in under 2 days so some details are a little missing, my bad lol
if I had to make a complaint honestly, the fact part of the previous chapter is at the beginning I feel like it is just word count along with the ads at the bottom, there is very little content in each chapter so I feel like I wait for a long time for a chapter only to have a couple of paragraphs to read which gets us nowhere it's like a permanent filler novel.
Anyone else feel like the story went really fast in the beginning then got incredibly boring and slow? This feels worse than filler, 20 chapters for a small conflict? I imagine he's going to just keep making small chapters about this well into the 30 or so chapter mark