Review Detail of IDaGoat_Mypark in My Multiverse Trip

Pretty sure only 2 people can read his thoughts he hasn't fully mastered occulmeny ones a seer and the other is his ai

Plus bro I wrote this from scratch in the past like 2 days just go with it lol I free handed this stuff and it's my first writing attempt so I'm not too bothered

Sure he needs a little more spine but it's really not that bad. A 1 star review because of some minor things is stupid. The writing quality and grammar is pretty good, chapter release rate is amazing so far and world/character development is really good.

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I disagree with you, the novel is desperately lacking both commas and apostrophes, alongside the couple misspelled words in need of correction. In the end, if I were to rate this book it'd be a 1.5/5 stars, and if the grammar is fixed it might go to 2.5/5 stars.

Ageee

Grammar nazi

im currently on 300+ in it and ive got to say for some one who could not even be bothered to take the time and read past the first 10 chapters u dont actually know anything about the story so far he is not a coward at all he just wants to have fun it actually picks up quite a bit later on altho u would have to read past the Harry Potter world to get their

i saw a similar setup just with another world and a far better MC, the funniest thing is that its a cultivation novel...