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DeadSaltedFishLv54yr
2020-04-25 08:33

Can't expect too much fight scenes in this because the MC...is weak. Early interactions with his sister is heartwarming, that's all that is good as of ch30. He has no clear goals right now and so it has become boring (for me). The plot: MC just interacts with sister and friend, trains despite having no improvements, showing off some unique abilities to shock them...the fights aren't exciting at all. The cheat: he gained a system which can possibly upgrade his skills to the max level. The cheat in not practical in the current stage because the mc is weak and poor.

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imperialdramonLv12

Heart warming wat dude that is some flirty **** not heart warming

algrife93Lv15

The MC being a weakling is the premise of the story as stated in the title”burden” which he will remain a burden to his friends and allies and sister throughout the story(i’v read till chapter 625) so far the MC kept being weak, physically weaker than everyone else, even younger people(male/female) where always stronger than him,he has a Timid Personality and is the kind of person who always seeks a backer, (just like any loser character that gets despised and trampled on by typical MC in other novels), yes he has a cheat and he has the potential to become supreme, but he lacks the mentality of the strong, he also lacks the desire to become strong, as he is satisfied by having a strong backer and following a strong leader, he’s a follower and not a leader, he decided to become a full supporter and thus decided to give up seeking combat skills and focused on just being a support, now that’s a very big problem as other supporters always have enough combat skills but since he lacks the number what he did was stupid, (with 9 stars he could have gotten one skill of every category (close range/long range attacks, control/manipulation, escape technique, survival techniques, healing, support, space powers, passive enhancement) and with his cheat he could upgrade them to always keep up with his star powers, unfortunately he didn’t plan his path, he didn’t even bother with it,)cultivation never makes him stronger only spending skill points which he wastes them on useless stuff instead of upgrading his powers, his stars techniques where choosen on useless skills because he never bothered to plan ahead at all, he is a complete burden, and the only reason others care about him is because he has medical skills, with his weak mentality that desire to follow the strong and be a loyal subordinate he completely focused on multiple healing skills(which is stupid because one is good enough since he can upgrade it) anyway, i didn’t like the story and the only reason i kept on reading is because i was planning to see if the MC will become a man or not, but he didn’t, he remained a sissy

DeadSaltedFishLv5

I'm glad i did not waste my time and first pass on this...

algrife93:The MC being a weakling is the premise of the story as stated in the title”burden” which he will remain a burden to his friends and allies and sister throughout the story(i’v read till chapter 625) so far the MC kept being weak, physically weaker than everyone else, even younger people(male/female) where always stronger than him,he has a Timid Personality and is the kind of person who always seeks a backer, (just like any loser character that gets despised and trampled on by typical MC in other novels), yes he has a cheat and he has the potential to become supreme, but he lacks the mentality of the strong, he also lacks the desire to become strong, as he is satisfied by having a strong backer and following a strong leader, he’s a follower and not a leader, he decided to become a full supporter and thus decided to give up seeking combat skills and focused on just being a support, now that’s a very big problem as other supporters always have enough combat skills but since he lacks the number what he did was stupid, (with 9 stars he could have gotten one skill of every category (close range/long range attacks, control/manipulation, escape technique, survival techniques, healing, support, space powers, passive enhancement) and with his cheat he could upgrade them to always keep up with his star powers, unfortunately he didn’t plan his path, he didn’t even bother with it,)cultivation never makes him stronger only spending skill points which he wastes them on useless stuff instead of upgrading his powers, his stars techniques where choosen on useless skills because he never bothered to plan ahead at all, he is a complete burden, and the only reason others care about him is because he has medical skills, with his weak mentality that desire to follow the strong and be a loyal subordinate he completely focused on multiple healing skills(which is stupid because one is good enough since he can upgrade it) anyway, i didn’t like the story and the only reason i kept on reading is because i was planning to see if the MC will become a man or not, but he didn’t, he remained a sissy
SeikatsuLv5

Ty for explaining why he is trash af even though I already knew it.

algrife93:The MC being a weakling is the premise of the story as stated in the title”burden” which he will remain a burden to his friends and allies and sister throughout the story(i’v read till chapter 625) so far the MC kept being weak, physically weaker than everyone else, even younger people(male/female) where always stronger than him,he has a Timid Personality and is the kind of person who always seeks a backer, (just like any loser character that gets despised and trampled on by typical MC in other novels), yes he has a cheat and he has the potential to become supreme, but he lacks the mentality of the strong, he also lacks the desire to become strong, as he is satisfied by having a strong backer and following a strong leader, he’s a follower and not a leader, he decided to become a full supporter and thus decided to give up seeking combat skills and focused on just being a support, now that’s a very big problem as other supporters always have enough combat skills but since he lacks the number what he did was stupid, (with 9 stars he could have gotten one skill of every category (close range/long range attacks, control/manipulation, escape technique, survival techniques, healing, support, space powers, passive enhancement) and with his cheat he could upgrade them to always keep up with his star powers, unfortunately he didn’t plan his path, he didn’t even bother with it,)cultivation never makes him stronger only spending skill points which he wastes them on useless stuff instead of upgrading his powers, his stars techniques where choosen on useless skills because he never bothered to plan ahead at all, he is a complete burden, and the only reason others care about him is because he has medical skills, with his weak mentality that desire to follow the strong and be a loyal subordinate he completely focused on multiple healing skills(which is stupid because one is good enough since he can upgrade it) anyway, i didn’t like the story and the only reason i kept on reading is because i was planning to see if the MC will become a man or not, but he didn’t, he remained a sissy
Sousheel_singhLv4

did he find his parents

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ShadowdraculLv5

In short the story is about a 25 year old gets transmigrated to a world with monster, killing whom grants you skills. Has a big sister who needs him in his team so he has to become stronger fast which seems to be the short term Boss fight. The story isn’t all vanilla, Some dark sides of human character is already shown. Overall with a humorous MC and nice side characters the book looks great. Details: World background: Earth has opened portals to various planes which are filled with monsters. Humanity evolved by killing this monsters and taking their skills. Mc: The trucksan was on holiday so the transmigration Of MC was done by slapkun. Mc is a 25 year old in a 15 year old’s body. He is quite likeable. Isn’t a psychopath, So killing monsters did affect him at the start. So far he is quite calm about things, and uses his brain. Though because he is new to the world most of his training path is decided by his sister. Cheat: At the starting base his powers are both good and bad for him, He only has 9 skill slots while even the most average people have 15-17 slots. But the cheat allows him to save 2 skills in 1 slot and they are able to be upgraded. But his body is too weak so his cultivation speed is very slow compared to how much his upgraded skills cost. Side characters: Currently the two most focused side characters are MC’s sister her best friend Both of whom are strong high schoolers. Their relationship is quite smooth for now. The Mc also got to know some schoolmates not sure if they will continue to be there in the story. So far it looks like if the Author introduces a named character he doesn’t just let them go after a chapter, But keeps using them so its not a waste to remember their names.

OpinionatedPotatoLv4

Poorly executed plot. Translator leaves much of the chinese language as is without providing explanations to the inside jokes or references that the author makes. This is nothing shot of pure laziness. There's a few specific chapters that involve a cell phone and some texting app, the only problem is that as the reader we have absolutely no clue what's going on. No translator notes, no editor notes, nothing. 5 Chapters of the 34 that I read are completely incomprehensible in relation to the plot because this translator is lazy. Besides that, I did mention that the plot was poorly executed. What I mean by that is that there's little to no segway into the actions the main character makes. Often times the author skips over explanations of situations or such explanations aren't translated well enough for the reader to understand what's happening. This ties into the translator being lazy. Concept wise, it's very interesting. I've read about similar concepts in other novels, but it's original enough to still feel fresh considering the overall bland nature of this genre. This is of course hampered by the lack of explanations from the author or the poorly translated explanations from the lazy translator. Much of the novel is lost in translation. Much of the novel is marketed towards people in China/Korea, it's not really meant for English audiences, I wouldn't be surprised if such people would have difficulty in relating to situations described in the novel. The author is very bad at writing fighting scenes. A lot of the background in such scenes is bland and lackluster with lack of detail. The combat is also poorly described. Overall, a lot is lacking with this novel.

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