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2020-05-24 05:03

AAAAUGGHHH ok please don’t read this if you aren’t up to date with the storyline. OK so. My thoughts: screw Jayden, he is a self-centered idiot, rapist, and horrible father and I only wish the worst for his life. May he rot in prison ALL his life. About Will. Will- you need to get back to your old self- you lost yourself awhile back and I can tell you are coming back, but you need to be a slight bit more understanding in general. When I say old-self I am only referring to when he was proud, strong (mentally), sexy (af), and more confident. I only want the best for him and I feel like he needs to find himself. About the kids- I only wish the best for them! They are amazing and wonderful and I can’t imagine how they would’ve turned out if it wasn’t for Will’s amazing motherly skills. They will grow up strong, happy, and caring for those around them! I just know it! Everyone else in the story: please understand what Will has gone through and why he has done what he has! He’s fine through more than AANNNNY of y’all and I feel like you guys need to know that. He deserves the world and no one can change my mind.

Hidden Omega

K_B_Bloom
4.6
176 Chs

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Winter_Lover_5711
Winter_Lover_5711Lv1

Yes jayden made a huge mistake but that was also the fault of the environment he lived in and i want his character to grow into a mature ***** who learns to respect will and get another chance cuz there is no doubt he loves them yes he is insane ,idiot and hurt them but i still want to see him work hard on himself for good and change others view on omegas

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Teacu
TeacuLv10

There are times one makes a mistake and can't ever go back on it.

4yr
DEVIL21
DEVIL21Lv1

To tell you the truth... I really feel sad for Asher Will and Jayden I want Will to be with them both 😭

Teacu:There are times one makes a mistake and can't ever go back on it.
4yr
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Brilliantly written. I find the development of the story especially good. The pacing is great, the characters are amusing and the story and world building is fantastic. My only problem would be how the readers never get a break with all the issues the MC faces but that's what I love about it. Always keeps me on my feet. Props to the author for such a well written story and for keeping such a consistent update schedule.

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W h a t a c l u s t e r f u c k. Abrupt transitions. There is so much confusion. Like how when why things. I do not understand the timeskip. Nothing makes sense in this story.

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