This is one of the BEST novels I have read on here! There are some mistakes here and there but it doesn’t matter! This story is so good! It has made me cry so much! My heart truly breaks for the main character and everything he is going through! The characters in this story really make me feel some type of way! Keep up the good work author! This is truly amazing. I really hope you keep writing.

Why do I feel that Elijah is Will destined mate half brother???? Am loving the story, more update ❤❤❤😍😍😍😘😘😘❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

I am in utter awe with this story. I came upon this book with just general interest of scrolling for new stories and I started to read a chapter as omegas and alphas are an interest of mine. I began on Friday evening and now it is Tuesday evening and I have finished all chapters that have been posted. I was hooked from the first chapter (minute one) and I couldn’t stop reading. I don’t usually like to read online as I like to hold the book in my hands, turn the page over physically, but I cannot fault anything about this at all. Thank you so much author for creating such a masterpiece, I cannot wait for the next chapter to be released and I look forward to reading when it is time for the right end to this story.

Brilliantly written. I find the development of the story especially good. The pacing is great, the characters are amusing and the story and world building is fantastic. My only problem would be how the readers never get a break with all the issues the MC faces but that's what I love about it. Always keeps me on my feet. Props to the author for such a well written story and for keeping such a consistent update schedule.

I always love omegaversed-background (bl) novel with dominant alpha being obsessive with their omega but this novel is just something else. I won't give any spoiler so read it! I both love it🤗 and hate it!!💔 The author really knows how to play with our emotion.. *sobbing

W h a t a c l u s t e r f u c k. Abrupt transitions. There is so much confusion. Like how when why things. I do not understand the timeskip. Nothing makes sense in this story.

This is one the best novels I've ever read, i love the character development, the story, everything! This novel made me feel a lot of different emotions. 1 second I am sad next angry then satisfied then worried...damn such a rollercoaster.

I really liked the novel, but I had to drop it because it lacked just one thing. Consistency i dont regret reading but at some point I didn't enjoy the arbitrary change in the plot anymore, characters sounds schizophrenic, things happens for no reason but to be "unexpected". but I enjoyed the smut and the good writing.

It's convoluted and confusing. The story drags on in some parts then rushes through others. Side characters are abruptly inserted without explanation or introduction. Lacks details of the world and society. And it feels as if there's barely any character development or growth.