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Lurker_Kurk
Lurker_KurkLv24yr
2020-05-12 21:33

W h a t a c l u s t e r f u c k. Abrupt transitions. There is so much confusion. Like how when why things. I do not understand the timeskip. Nothing makes sense in this story.

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K_B_Bloom
K_B_BloomAuthor

Did you read 5 chapters past the time skip? In the notes chapter, it says that this should make everything clear

VanessaNicole2
VanessaNicole2Lv3

It didn't make anything clear.

K_B_Bloom:Did you read 5 chapters past the time skip? In the notes chapter, it says that this should make everything clear
VanessaNicole2
VanessaNicole2Lv3

It didn't make anything clear.

K_B_Bloom:Did you read 5 chapters past the time skip? In the notes chapter, it says that this should make everything clear
Anoxious
AnoxiousLv12

I was really confused as well but when I saw the note I just continued reading. It cleared almost everything up for me and I gotta say, while I am normally not the biggest fan of time-skips, I felt like this one was really well done. I dont get the negative critics on it!

K_B_Bloom:Did you read 5 chapters past the time skip? In the notes chapter, it says that this should make everything clear
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