Yeah, this is stupid mc is an abomination of a man with animal ears and tail? WTF. this isn't some fantasy world with catgirls and sh*t this is a world of humans! With our mc being part whatever abomination he is, he will stick out like a needle in a high stack.
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LIKESure, because a man with 6 arms, a WHOLE clan of people with the appearance of Shark, a clan that can use their bones as weapons, a person who can change sex, a fucking clan of aliens, among many other clans with stupid skills, are very normal for the world of Naruto. Honestly, I think you're just upset that I changed the appearance of the protagonist.
All these things you mentioned are quite minor. The so-called aliens 'otsuski' I am pretty much non-existent in naruto world except Kaguya at the end of the series(they also look human except extremely pale). Using bones as weapons is an ability like Jutsu(understandable with bloodline unique abilities). Orochimaru is already known as a weird disturbing/sick scientist in the world. There's always limits even in naruto world itself. You basically made your mc to be an outcast abomination which isn't something I'd enjoy reading about. I mean Fox ears and a tail are you serious? Perhaps you have some sort of fury kink?
Naruto has whiskers.
The thing is they aren't humans but talking frogs who also live in another realm! Now imagine Naruto with animal parts(ears and a tail/fur) walking into a city or a village, everybody would look at him like so freak show! Moreover talking frogs or other animals don't really interact with people other then shinobi who they have contracted with.
Calling other people immature is quite rude and silly. What you said doesn't make sense and actually shows how you yourself may be quite young. Concerning ratings this site is notorious for how crap they are and how authors can delete them at will, therefore there isn't any standard that is upheld.
Wow ... never seen a review like this ,you probably haven't read Naruto properly it means ? Deidara had mouth on his hands , sasori was literally a mass of flash and puppet body , orochimaru's is basically snake in human form, kabuto after absorbing orochimaru have snake tails , black and white zetsu are basically humanoid venus flytraps, also orochimaru's experiments were all having some kind of horns on their body ,sasuke in cursed mode had wings which were like big hands ,kakuzu had stiches and face masks all over his body ,hidan cursed form is basically Skelton over skin,Naruto and jiraya's sage mode almost made them like frogs , kisame is basically a humanoid shark ,and there are many examples of characters with weird features in Naruto series ....just by having fox like features in Naruto doesnt effect the plot or story much and I don't think it's weird as in the story he is completely melded with fox so he is like s cross between fox and human ...I don't understand the base of your criticism
Can you read and understand the English language?! Most things you mentioned aren't permanent unlike the mc here where they ARE part of his body. It's one thing to gain odd features during power-ups and so on and another being some sort of hybrid furry THING permanently.
They are still part of him, he's just hiding them. It would be better for naruto to have some sort of 2 forms-ONE NORMAL HUMAN-ANOTHER WEIRD HALF FOX THING that he is.
Alright ,now I understand ...you just hate that's mc have fox ears and tails and that have clouded your judgement as I have said before , how can this made the story bad ? ..also yes not all of us plebs are super intelligent and well versed in English language like a genius like you are so plz be magnanimous to us poor souls
Alright ,now I understand ...you just hate that's mc have fox ears and tails and that have clouded your judgement as I have said before , how can this made the story bad ? ..also yes not all of us plebs are super intelligent and well versed in English language like a genius like you are so plz be magnanimous to us poor souls
I didn't say yr English is terrible I said you can't comprehend what I meant when I expressed my idea through English. Also yes I do hate this mc for fox ears and a tail as I find it very silly. It reminds me of cat people from typical fantasy anime rather than naruto shinobi. So yeah it takes me away from the stories immersion.