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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv44yr
2020-05-01 08:14

Yeah, this is stupid mc is an abomination of a man with animal ears and tail? WTF. this isn't some fantasy world with catgirls and sh*t this is a world of humans! With our mc being part whatever abomination he is, he will stick out like a needle in a high stack.

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GenoXX
GenoXXAuthor

Sure, because a man with 6 arms, a WHOLE clan of people with the appearance of Shark, a clan that can use their bones as weapons, a person who can change sex, a fucking clan of aliens, among many other clans with stupid skills, are very normal for the world of Naruto. Honestly, I think you're just upset that I changed the appearance of the protagonist.

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

All these things you mentioned are quite minor. The so-called aliens 'otsuski' I am pretty much non-existent in naruto world except Kaguya at the end of the series(they also look human except extremely pale). Using bones as weapons is an ability like Jutsu(understandable with bloodline unique abilities). Orochimaru is already known as a weird disturbing/sick scientist in the world. There's always limits even in naruto world itself. You basically made your mc to be an outcast abomination which isn't something I'd enjoy reading about. I mean Fox ears and a tail are you serious? Perhaps you have some sort of fury kink?

GenoXX:Sure, because a man with 6 arms, a WHOLE clan of people with the appearance of Shark, a clan that can use their bones as weapons, a person who can change sex, a fucking clan of aliens, among many other clans with stupid skills, are very normal for the world of Naruto. Honestly, I think you're just upset that I changed the appearance of the protagonist.
Valhalla123
Valhalla123Lv3

Naruto has whiskers.

Uncle_Sheogorath:All these things you mentioned are quite minor. The so-called aliens 'otsuski' I am pretty much non-existent in naruto world except Kaguya at the end of the series(they also look human except extremely pale). Using bones as weapons is an ability like Jutsu(understandable with bloodline unique abilities). Orochimaru is already known as a weird disturbing/sick scientist in the world. There's always limits even in naruto world itself. You basically made your mc to be an outcast abomination which isn't something I'd enjoy reading about. I mean Fox ears and a tail are you serious? Perhaps you have some sort of fury kink?
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

They are whisker marks not actual whiskers.

Valhalla123:Naruto has whiskers.
Valhalla123
Valhalla123Lv3

Kisame

Uncle_Sheogorath:They are whisker marks not actual whiskers.
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Original Naruto has whisker marks they are like scars not actual whiskers of a fox.

Valhalla123:Kisame
Valhalla123
Valhalla123Lv3

I don't think ears and tails are that big of a deal compared to giant talking frogs that smoke.

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

The thing is they aren't humans but talking frogs who also live in another realm! Now imagine Naruto with animal parts(ears and a tail/fur) walking into a city or a village, everybody would look at him like so freak show! Moreover talking frogs or other animals don't really interact with people other then shinobi who they have contracted with.

Valhalla123:I don't think ears and tails are that big of a deal compared to giant talking frogs that smoke.
Fast_Reader
Fast_ReaderLv5

If you do not like it for a personal reason do not read it but you put 2 stars, this is to rate a novel according to its characteristics such as grammar and other things, appreciate the work of other people because it is not easy do not be immature

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Calling other people immature is quite rude and silly. What you said doesn't make sense and actually shows how you yourself may be quite young. Concerning ratings this site is notorious for how crap they are and how authors can delete them at will, therefore there isn't any standard that is upheld.

Fast_Reader:If you do not like it for a personal reason do not read it but you put 2 stars, this is to rate a novel according to its characteristics such as grammar and other things, appreciate the work of other people because it is not easy do not be immature
Valhalla123
Valhalla123Lv3

Kisame is the shark guy

Uncle_Sheogorath:Original Naruto has whisker marks they are like scars not actual whiskers of a fox.
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

Wow ... never seen a review like this ,you probably haven't read Naruto properly it means ? Deidara had mouth on his hands , sasori was literally a mass of flash and puppet body , orochimaru's is basically snake in human form, kabuto after absorbing orochimaru have snake tails , black and white zetsu are basically humanoid venus flytraps, also orochimaru's experiments were all having some kind of horns on their body ,sasuke in cursed mode had wings which were like big hands ,kakuzu had stiches and face masks all over his body ,hidan cursed form is basically Skelton over skin,Naruto and jiraya's sage mode almost made them like frogs , kisame is basically a humanoid shark ,and there are many examples of characters with weird features in Naruto series ....just by having fox like features in Naruto doesnt effect the plot or story much and I don't think it's weird as in the story he is completely melded with fox so he is like s cross between fox and human ...I don't understand the base of your criticism

Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

Also he uses transformation jutsu to remove those ears and tails a lot of time he goes out ...you would notice this of you have read the story

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Can you read and understand the English language?! Most things you mentioned aren't permanent unlike the mc here where they ARE part of his body. It's one thing to gain odd features during power-ups and so on and another being some sort of hybrid furry THING permanently.

Deadrule_vivek:Wow ... never seen a review like this ,you probably haven't read Naruto properly it means ? Deidara had mouth on his hands , sasori was literally a mass of flash and puppet body , orochimaru's is basically snake in human form, kabuto after absorbing orochimaru have snake tails , black and white zetsu are basically humanoid venus flytraps, also orochimaru's experiments were all having some kind of horns on their body ,sasuke in cursed mode had wings which were like big hands ,kakuzu had stiches and face masks all over his body ,hidan cursed form is basically Skelton over skin,Naruto and jiraya's sage mode almost made them like frogs , kisame is basically a humanoid shark ,and there are many examples of characters with weird features in Naruto series ....just by having fox like features in Naruto doesnt effect the plot or story much and I don't think it's weird as in the story he is completely melded with fox so he is like s cross between fox and human ...I don't understand the base of your criticism
Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

They are still part of him, he's just hiding them. It would be better for naruto to have some sort of 2 forms-ONE NORMAL HUMAN-ANOTHER WEIRD HALF FOX THING that he is.

Deadrule_vivek:Also he uses transformation jutsu to remove those ears and tails a lot of time he goes out ...you would notice this of you have read the story
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

Alright ,now I understand ...you just hate that's mc have fox ears and tails and that have clouded your judgement as I have said before , how can this made the story bad ? ..also yes not all of us plebs are super intelligent and well versed in English language like a genius like you are so plz be magnanimous to us poor souls

Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

Alright ,now I understand ...you just hate that's mc have fox ears and tails and that have clouded your judgement as I have said before , how can this made the story bad ? ..also yes not all of us plebs are super intelligent and well versed in English language like a genius like you are so plz be magnanimous to us poor souls

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

I didn't say yr English is terrible I said you can't comprehend what I meant when I expressed my idea through English. Also yes I do hate this mc for fox ears and a tail as I find it very silly. It reminds me of cat people from typical fantasy anime rather than naruto shinobi. So yeah it takes me away from the stories immersion.

Deadrule_vivek:Alright ,now I understand ...you just hate that's mc have fox ears and tails and that have clouded your judgement as I have said before , how can this made the story bad ? ..also yes not all of us plebs are super intelligent and well versed in English language like a genius like you are so plz be magnanimous to us poor souls
i3bdul
i3bdulLv14

The thing's I love about comments is the debate that happens between the author and the hater it's fun to read

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

they have an entire group of people like that...yeesh, its like u never watched naruto

Valhalla123:Kisame
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