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kouk2002
kouk2002Lv115yr
2020-01-26 04:53

I rarely bother to write reviews although I should probably do it more. Anyway, first the reason behind the 2 4 star aspects. Writing quality is a little lacking but I think that mainly comes from the translation itself. The story is great. Since the original has 340+ chapters, as only 7are translated it is quite behind. I also imagine it isn't really a priority to translate compared to writing new material. There hasn't been any reason given, so I simply believe it is set in an AU to explain the changes that happened that the MC wasn't part of. I love fanfics because I like seeing how people expand and explore the world beyond the original. This is where this novel has shined so far. As I said it seems to be something of an AU so things were already going in a different direction even before the MC was born or appeared. Some people who previously died are still alive, but I won't say who and let you experience it fully yourselves. The events that lead to the MC birth or appearance were unique to me. How he came to be, how his appearance changed from the original and all the cause and effects that these differences brought were interesting, to say the least. These brought many changes to people's personalities and changes some of the relationships between many known characters. This leaves if feeling both familiar and fresh at the same time. How the future will play out becomes a little uncertain and that drives your desire to read more. I can only hope for two things to happen. First, the author continues to translate this into English. Second, if there comes a time the author cannot continue to do so, that they put the original novel up on some other site where machine translation is possible to allow me and others the joy to continue reading this.

The Legend of the Kyubi

GenoXX
4.0
839 Chs

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GenoXX
GenoXXAuthor

Thanks for the Review. What I try to do is keep the original events but modify them in my way so that the plot is not so affected. The other is that I keep their personalities as close as possible to the original work, of course, I do not count characters that affect the changes I have thought. And referring to that if I will keep translating this story, I will still have to upload only 3 chapters per week. Finally, I would like to know if the story is comfortable to read or the spelling mistakes are very annoying, thank you very much again.

5yr
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kouk2002
kouk2002Lv11

Currently reading on pc. Though If I spot any glaring errors when I read on my phone I will point them out as it is easier. The most noticeable and common one I saw was the mix up of gender. Unfortunately, it is all too common on this site to the point I stopped caring so long as it was clear who was actually being referred to or speaking. Once or twice I did spot untranslated words, and one chapter even ended with a final line untranslated. I think it was the chapter he returns back to Kohona and with a bit of effort (it was hard to find a way to copy the text to translate), I was able to translate it. It said something like 'Those were the events that marked the beginning of their lives in Konohagakure no Sato'. The original was 'Esos fueron los eventos que marcaron el inicio de sus vidas en Konohakagure no Sato' Thanks for replying, and for taking the time to translate it. Even with a few flaws in the translation, it is a great read.

GenoXX:Thanks for the Review. What I try to do is keep the original events but modify them in my way so that the plot is not so affected. The other is that I keep their personalities as close as possible to the original work, of course, I do not count characters that affect the changes I have thought. And referring to that if I will keep translating this story, I will still have to upload only 3 chapters per week. Finally, I would like to know if the story is comfortable to read or the spelling mistakes are very annoying, thank you very much again.
5yr
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PhotosphereLv14

Already read the Spanish version, truly one of the best fanfics out there, and one of the best naruto fanfics overall, highly recommended. Character Development: Great character development and excellent use of already existing character's backgrounds to add them to the story and keep them there without disappearing. Story: Great fanfic with quite an original plot edition, great comedy and a badass protagonist with a great and interesting background story. Harem Members: One of the best characteristics of the series, the author somehow was able to keep a great number of females in the series giving each of them good development and keeping them active through all of the series, you could say that even the least important one of the harem appears quite a bit of times, the girls don't join just because MC is MC, there are steps to go with each of them until they decide to join all according to their original personalities of the cannon. The only "bad thing" would be how the author will handle grammar since his original language is Spanish but then again, we Spanish readers will support. Have a good read.

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GenoXX
GenoXXAuthor

Greetings to all, here the author of the story. As I said in the synopsis of the story, this is a story that was originally written in Spanish and I am translating it with Google Translate and helped me with Grammarly, so I'm sure there will still be mistakes. Referring to my story, what I did was take the original events and modify them at my convenience, and with this, I can make a plot that is familiar and at the same time different. The personalities of the characters are the closest to the original personalities of each of them, of course, I have modified them as well as the plot. My protagonist, Kurama Uzumaki ... I am not going to talk about him because I want you to know how he is and has an idea of ​​his personality for yourselves. Now the important thing, the speed in which I am translating this story is one chapter per day (In the worst case, I will upload 3 chapters per week). I can't translate anymore because I have to go out to look for work, write a chapter of my other story and do my personal affairs.

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ViciousHandler
ViciousHandlerLv5

Dropping this because there is too much pedo crap. Author must have pedo tendency I bet. From chapter 3, author hinted of 1 year old getting molest by pedophile. Then at 10 year old MC get force blow job and has sexual relationships with MILF (Sasuke’s mom). Waste of my time with this crap!

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asaade_ragnarokm
asaade_ragnarokmLv4

haha what a trash the drama is all over the top that its not believable anymore and the characters have a different personality in each chapter specifically minato ch 2 he's the useless father just like in canon snd in ch 3 he became the scumbag father/husband you see in most korean drama also there's so many fake review and also deleted the other low star review so this is trash. p. s the author have the guts to do patreon with this trash work so laughable

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Dumbgum
DumbgumLv4

What can I say? It's a disgusting fanfic. .................................................................................................

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Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4

Yeah, this is stupid mc is an abomination of a man with animal ears and tail? WTF. this isn't some fantasy world with catgirls and sh*t this is a world of humans! With our mc being part whatever abomination he is, he will stick out like a needle in a high stack.

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idle_enthusiast
idle_enthusiastLv14

Let just say it a good concept but poorly written with shallow plot other than romance that forced. Doesn't have detail explain on story and doesn't even follow the world logic. It a fanfiction in meaning of someone dream shoved into Naruto and fall apart because it forced to fit in, than a fanfic with original idea that combine with naruto. I don't know if it will become better because I'm not strong enough to read it after few chapter, so try to read and see yourself. I don't really about the morality of fanfic some comments say pedo or whatever after all it a fanfic but bad is bad not for content morality but from the story.

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Anonny_Anonymous
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Absolutely revolting. The pedo content is out of control. Example: Literally hours after the MC’s birth, one of the characters is hinting at having a sexual relationship with the baby. And the mom approved it. None of the chapters act like their canon counterparts. The world is almost unrecognizable. The MC has Fox ears and a tail which would be bad enough, except every other paragraph someone is bringing up the fact he has Fox traits. They call him foxy-kun or rub his ears. The author must have some weird fetishes because the main character gets sexually assaulted many times in this fic. I absolutely detest this fic. DO NOT READ IT. IT IS AWFUL.

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Reveal spoiler

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YOU REALLY DID IT! Thank you! ^^ I can finally read it in english, it doesn't ecen matter to me if google translate will ruin part if the story. The story us good enough that it wouldn't even leave a dent in it's glory :3

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