Item: Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons
Rating: 3.8
Author: Bored_Raccoon

Bored_RaccoonLv44yr

2020-12-08 00:03

I think this has some potential, but honestly, the grammar mistakes are a major turn off for me. I expect the occasional mistake and/or typo but so far there are too many syntax mistakes. I only read up to chapter 9 so far, will the grammar improve in later chapters? I didn't give a bad grade because I think the author crafted a very original and interesting world background and should he get someone to proof read and fix the mistakes in the early chapters I would truly enjoy this novel.

Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons

Immanioripse

4.6

643 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies5

DARK_KNIGHT_Lv15

does the writing get better? feel like it has potential, but i just cant read it atm lol

4yr

Bored_RaccoonLv4

I stopped reading, it’s such a turn off for me when a webnovel has awful grammar. Kinda sad because the story was quite interesting.

DARK_KNIGHT_:does the writing get better? feel like it has potential, but i just cant read it atm lol

4yr

Ch33syLv15

Did you seriously write a review after 9 chapters? The author even said in 1st chapter to have some patience about the grammer. Gets alot better pretty quickly and the story after you have read it all is mindblowing good! You are missing out on probably the best novel in here. Yes i've read all 620 chapters🤓

4yr

Bored_RaccoonLv4

Good for you 👍

Ch33sy:Did you seriously write a review after 9 chapters? The author even said in 1st chapter to have some patience about the grammer. Gets alot better pretty quickly and the story after you have read it all is mindblowing good! You are missing out on probably the best novel in here. Yes i've read all 620 chapters🤓

4yr

DARK_KNIGHT_Lv15

yeah i feel the same lol the concept seems really cool but the writing style and grammar was just too simple, missing a bit of complexity

Bored_Raccoon:I stopped reading, it’s such a turn off for me when a webnovel has awful grammar. Kinda sad because the story was quite interesting.

4yr

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ImmanioripseAuthor

Hey there, everybody 🖖🏻 I wanted to thank you all for the constant support and feedbacks you're giving me, thanks to you, BoAP is finally getting popular on WN, entering the top 250 male-lead orignal novels ⚔️🌍 These are my Milestone Goals, with which you can let it grow even more, climbing the rankings👾 🗡️ 800 Power Stones ➡️ +1 Bonus Chapter 💥 🗡️🗡️ 1K Power Stones ➡️ +2 Bonus Chapters 💥💥 🗡️🗡️🗡️ 2K Power Stones ➡️ +3 Bonus Chapters 💥💥💥 Also remember to join my discord! https://discord.gg/XxGKwxX

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balubalubalu666Lv4

There goes our author worrying about his English skills, but truth to be told he's a bit better than normal native english speakers. Dag our little protagonist, hope he becomes that Viking op guy, and exploring other aspects. Story's good hope the author not quit the book half way hanging around. Make atleast 300 chapters for us, author kun. And thnx for chapters.

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ranmaroLv14

Well this novel is a hidden gem in this site It is highly under rated I highly recommend it I will add a more detailed review when i finish it It is really worth reading

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Darkshadow12Lv4

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Incognito0001Lv13

I think I gave the book a fair shot but it just does not suit my taste. The MC has no character development after leaving Earth, his values are weird af, he spent like 2 days in the Clan and the person that got him kicked later 'sacrificed' himself to save him and MC thought of him as a great friend? While his father of 10 years is never mentioned again XD? He idolized a dead person while he just gives no **** about a living one smh. MC seems too stupid for my taste like I don't mind a dense MC but one who has 2 brain cells is a no :D Kinda weird because when he came to this pantheon the instructor called him smart but somehow he became more of a caveman 'me smash' 'ooga booga' 'me kill' 'u ded' after the 10 year skip. You could say I should just read more because it gets better but is 86 chapters not enough?

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Blood_EmpireLv3

The authors novel is not bad I just think he tried to introduce to many different elements in a single book, and the characters sense of logic is odd. I mean the Xis punish humans because humans action aprently messed with the universal balance. The planet was dying because the sun burnt out I mean humans arent responsible for that. Now don't get me wrong im not stopping anyone from reading this book just giving my review.

4yr

BlackRenLv4

It's a hidden gem very much like it. Hope it gets many more chapters and the recognition it deserves. The myth content is very interesting.

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Daoist740880Lv1

This novel is underestimated! Great story development, writing quality and character design. World background amazing. The expressive capacity and imagination of the author are high. The story has a great potential and and I hope it has the right success, because it deserves it. I TOTALLY RECOMMEND IT, five full stars 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟

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DRealJexterLv2

I like it. The plot can be well developed and there is a wide range for future development, as I can see dag becoming the Viking king and going on interstellar crusades or perhaps forming an alliance with his friend Hiro, who can also be a leader of his planet.

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