DARK_KNIGHT_

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

great fight but honestly i hope youre not gonna make them a thing, he cant be sleeping with every female in the novel.... especially someone that deceived and tried to kill him...

this novel descriptions seems extremely generic, is it actually worth a read? literally sounds like every other online reborn novel out there

Has there been any improvement on what you mentioned above

man like 5 chapters of nothing, seriously thinking about dropping this, just talk for like 250 chapters

so much talking

idk how feel about mother being brought back so early. and feels cliche to constantly be saving girls in a sect from a "young master". hopefully gets away from the girl saving trope yawn

have you read ahead? is this novel worth reading? because i feel exactly the same as you, as a reincarnated assassin he shouldnt be so naive, his decisions are questionable and his "strong mentality" is actually weak and quite emotionally immature considering hes already over 40 years old. The novel has potential but characters emotions and decisions feel forced to some extent

yeah i feel the same lol the concept seems really cool but the writing style and grammar was just too simple, missing a bit of complexity

characters motivations seem a little too unrealistic, other then that the story itself is quite good from what ive read. My biggest issue is grammar, having to constantly reread parts of the story just so that it makes sense. Can anyone let me know when its reedited? would love to read a bit more but can't continue reading it atm (read more than 3 chapters)