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Incognito0001
Incognito0001Lv134yr
2020-06-28 06:03

I think I gave the book a fair shot but it just does not suit my taste. The MC has no character development after leaving Earth, his values are weird af, he spent like 2 days in the Clan and the person that got him kicked later 'sacrificed' himself to save him and MC thought of him as a great friend? While his father of 10 years is never mentioned again XD? He idolized a dead person while he just gives no **** about a living one smh. MC seems too stupid for my taste like I don't mind a dense MC but one who has 2 brain cells is a no :D Kinda weird because when he came to this pantheon the instructor called him smart but somehow he became more of a caveman 'me smash' 'ooga booga' 'me kill' 'u ded' after the 10 year skip. You could say I should just read more because it gets better but is 86 chapters not enough?

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Immanioripse
ImmanioripseAuthor

You right, 86 are not enough 😃 This is a slow pace novel, so sorry for you mate

akhil_akki
akhil_akkiLv1

he doest give a **** about adopted father but want to take revenge for imaginary so called father

NightPrince
NightPrinceLv4

Hmm was there any system teacher during ur 86 chapters journey?? I dont understand why there is system tag in this stupid novel

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