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Vi_Si
Vi_SiLv23yr
2021-04-25 23:31

This could've been so much better... After reading all the available chapters all I can say about this is cringe, immature, unreasonable. That's it.

Unrivaled System

XxEagleNightxX
4.5
250 Chs

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XxEagleNightxX
XxEagleNightxXAuthor

Shameless author here ill be giving my book 5star... . . . . .. .. . . . . .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . ... ... . . . . . .. ..

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Hayato_Shinohara
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I don't know why this book has so many views and powerstones. I read through the prologue and cringed multiple times from the poor writing quality, lack of story development and just how generic and pushed over it feels. Sure, it can come across as a decent story but the way it's being written and executed is just unbearable to me. I decided to leave an honest review since most of them consist of nonsensical spam from questionable users.

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Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

Umm not much of a synopsis. What is the book about?

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novels1994
novels1994Lv4

Great novel keep up the amazing story Great novel keep up the amazing story Great novel keep up the amazing story Great novel keep up the amazing story

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Aviral
AviralLv10

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DarkConquerorPR
DarkConquerorPRLv13

I don't know why people hate this novel i guess it's normal since it's based on what they like/dislike, to be honest i'm more simple-minded maybe? Anyways, yes the grammar is pretty bad but not unbearable like other novels that i have read *Cough* Wattpad *Cough* Other than that i like where the story is going i really want the mc to meet the godess soon and see if the author have them fall for each other, but i know that's going to happen wayyy later into the future since he hasn't met the queens wich i am looking forward for him to meet them aswell i hope he gets them aswell, i know the author said that all girls will be virgins but i know he will somehow get around that if he decides on getting them (There is a mission on the mc needing 100 women so it makes sense that to unite all continents he should get the queens and daughters) maybe have it so the daughters are not really theirs? or have them be reborn when they accept the mc thru some bloodline then they get their virginity back. Anyways i like basically everything i don't really have any complaints since this novel suits my tastes right now. Oh! maybe get the student council president i saw the picture but i haven't read about the authors plans for her. I will comment on future chapters if i think of anything about this novel maybe something will help, i'm just saying what's on my mind nothing more nothing less... ** English is not my native language so i don't fully know how my comments will be interpreted "Shrugs" it's either "" or ** eh whatever i'm shrugging right now, -Victor good day/night.

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Thiha_Htutkhaung
Thiha_HtutkhaungLv3

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Krisavq
KrisavqLv14

The story was overall good, but the spelling can be a bit better. The story gives the background a very detailed explanation about the world and as well out the characters.

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Nan2009
Nan2009Lv4

When I read the novel synopsis & its high rating I was really expecting a good story, but it got destroyed by MC hypocritical d^ck character. Every girl MC meet end up in love with MC in less than 5 chapter. I felt MC relationship with girls superfluous. If author could made girls interaction with MC more natural it would have been perfect, instead of love at 1st sight. Also it would be appreciated if there are normal "girls" which are not part of MC harem. **: The story got lot of potential, if author could focus more on plot/action instead of MC superfluous relationships.

4yr
dhiraj_shinde_1631
dhiraj_shinde_1631Lv3

I Can't wait for him Having Sex with Princesses Mom ( QUEEN'S )..... Add that Chapter Soon Pls Can't w8 for it.......馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃構馃槈馃槈馃槈

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