Item: Unrivaled System
Rating: 5
Author: XxEagleNightxX

XxEagleNightxXAuthor5yr

2020-01-29 22:28

Shameless author here ill be giving my book 5star... . . . . .. .. . . . . .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . ... ... . . . . . .. ..

Unrivaled System

XxEagleNightxX

4.5

250 Chs

Liked by 51 people

Replies34

TigerBlooImmortalLv15

Fix the grammar so that I may read it, I want to but my brain hurts when I try.

5yr

ReincarnatedSaintLv10

Hey, you should check you synopsis, its very confusing. I don't understand what you are trying to convey

5yr

XxEagleNightxXAuthor

Sorry but I don't really know how to put a synopsis, just bear with me okay Im still new

ReincarnatedSaint:Hey, you should check you synopsis, its very confusing. I don't understand what you are trying to convey

5yr

XxEagleNightxXAuthor

Sorry but I don't really know how to put a synopsis, just bear with me okay Im still new

ReincarnatedSaint:Hey, you should check you synopsis, its very confusing. I don't understand what you are trying to convey

5yr

ReincarnatedSaintLv10

Nah, I am not complaining, I am new author too. I just saw jumbled sentences and confusing phrases. So I just throught of pointing it out

XxEagleNightxX:Sorry but I don't really know how to put a synopsis, just bear with me okay Im still new

5yr

ReincarnatedSaintLv10

Nah, I am not complaining, I am new author too. I just saw jumbled sentences and confusing phrases. So I just throught of pointing it out

XxEagleNightxX:Sorry but I don't really know how to put a synopsis, just bear with me okay Im still new

5yr

XxEagleNightxXAuthor

Its fine what is your novel?

ReincarnatedSaint:Nah, I am not complaining, I am new author too. I just saw jumbled sentences and confusing phrases. So I just throught of pointing it out

5yr

XxEagleNightxXAuthor

Its fine what is your novel?

ReincarnatedSaint:Nah, I am not complaining, I am new author too. I just saw jumbled sentences and confusing phrases. So I just throught of pointing it out

5yr

ReincarnatedSaintLv10

Its called The Ancient Genes

5yr

ReincarnatedSaintLv10

Its called The Ancient Genes

5yr

XxEagleNightxXAuthor

Let me read it then, let's support each other as a new author

ReincarnatedSaint:Its called The Ancient Genes

5yr

XxEagleNightxXAuthor

Let me read it then, let's support each other as a new author

ReincarnatedSaint:Its called The Ancient Genes

5yr

ReincarnatedSaintLv10

Yeah sure ReincarnatedSaint#2904 Add me on Discord

5yr

ZappCodeLv12

Lmao. That was very nice of you. I can see that your very honest and still friendly. I will check your novel or series out, kind sir.

ReincarnatedSaint:Yeah sure ReincarnatedSaint#2904 Add me on Discord

4yr

ZappCodeLv12

You keep switching between- here is an example- he walked into the room, notices that the door opposite of him is still closed. Do you get the problem in that sentence? If you wish, I would love to help you. I am a new novelist, on this site. But I do freelancing writing all the time. XD. I hope you keep up your work, I like your spirit and determination, you at least are trying to fix what you made a mistake. Good luck. I like where the story is going.

XxEagleNightxX:Sorry but I don't really know how to put a synopsis, just bear with me okay Im still new

4yr

XxEagleNightxXAuthor

Thanks

ZappCode:You keep switching between- here is an example- he walked into the room, notices that the door opposite of him is still closed. Do you get the problem in that sentence? If you wish, I would love to help you. I am a new novelist, on this site. But I do freelancing writing all the time. XD. I hope you keep up your work, I like your spirit and determination, you at least are trying to fix what you made a mistake. Good luck. I like where the story is going.

4yr

XxEagleNightxXAuthor

Thanks

4yr

ZappCodeLv12

Not at all. Btw, I like your profile picture, it is very cute lol

XxEagleNightxX:Thanks

4yr

khaosspawnLv15

This story is great, though I would suggest varying the build of the girls a bit, and maybe some "research" to add some variety to the r18 chapters (Literotica has a large variety of research materials from many different authors in many styles that may provide some inspiration) I can't wait to see how the story continues it has been a great read so far

4yr

lSpacelLv14

Its a good novel

4yr

Other Reviews

Hayato_ShinoharaLv10

I don't know why this book has so many views and powerstones. I read through the prologue and cringed multiple times from the poor writing quality, lack of story development and just how generic and pushed over it feels. Sure, it can come across as a decent story but the way it's being written and executed is just unbearable to me. I decided to leave an honest review since most of them consist of nonsensical spam from questionable users.

5yr

Malcolm_MasseyLv14

Umm not much of a synopsis. What is the book about?

5yr

novels1994Lv4

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AviralLv10

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DarkConquerorPRLv13

I don't know why people hate this novel i guess it's normal since it's based on what they like/dislike, to be honest i'm more simple-minded maybe? Anyways, yes the grammar is pretty bad but not unbearable like other novels that i have read *Cough* Wattpad *Cough* Other than that i like where the story is going i really want the mc to meet the godess soon and see if the author have them fall for each other, but i know that's going to happen wayyy later into the future since he hasn't met the queens wich i am looking forward for him to meet them aswell i hope he gets them aswell, i know the author said that all girls will be virgins but i know he will somehow get around that if he decides on getting them (There is a mission on the mc needing 100 women so it makes sense that to unite all continents he should get the queens and daughters) maybe have it so the daughters are not really theirs? or have them be reborn when they accept the mc thru some bloodline then they get their virginity back. Anyways i like basically everything i don't really have any complaints since this novel suits my tastes right now. Oh! maybe get the student council president i saw the picture but i haven't read about the authors plans for her. I will comment on future chapters if i think of anything about this novel maybe something will help, i'm just saying what's on my mind nothing more nothing less... ** English is not my native language so i don't fully know how my comments will be interpreted "Shrugs" it's either "" or ** eh whatever i'm shrugging right now, -Victor good day/night.

4yr

Thiha_HtutkhaungLv3

FOR JUSTICE AND FOR WORLD PEACE YOU SHOLD MORE WRITE LIKE THIS NOVELS 😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜😜 ☆☆MORE STRIPE SCENES AND MORE LOVE MAKING WIYH SEXY CLOTHES .OK.☆☆ 🥂🥂🥂

5yr

KrisavqLv14

The story was overall good, but the spelling can be a bit better. The story gives the background a very detailed explanation about the world and as well out the characters.

5yr

Nan2009Lv4

When I read the novel synopsis & its high rating I was really expecting a good story, but it got destroyed by MC hypocritical d^ck character. Every girl MC meet end up in love with MC in less than 5 chapter. I felt MC relationship with girls superfluous. If author could made girls interaction with MC more natural it would have been perfect, instead of love at 1st sight. Also it would be appreciated if there are normal "girls" which are not part of MC harem. **: The story got lot of potential, if author could focus more on plot/action instead of MC superfluous relationships.

4yr

dhiraj_shinde_1631Lv3

I Can't wait for him Having Sex with Princesses Mom ( QUEEN'S )..... Add that Chapter Soon Pls Can't w8 for it.......😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😉😉😉

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