If you read it and don`t really like it, just leave, why bother creating a dirt just to throw it to the author... why can`t you just appreciate it ?... go create your own then tell me if it isn`t hard to create one..

The review section isn’t to praise the author, but to grade the story and give criticism, good and/or bad. And this story is far from perfect.

The other user summed it up for me. And in case you were wondering, yes, I do write myself. Do give my work a look if you want to see how I write.

Ur a virgin in real life arent ya?

Its pretty rare to find virgin girls in this generation

Yea they most definitely are a virgin with that mindset like wtf there are few virgins on the women side it doesn't make them sl*ts it makes them a normal person

Wow...

The writing quality is constantly improving as the story progresses, and it is very obvious that the author is working hard on improving himself as he is trying to correct his past mistakes.

Sorry miss if it hurt ur feelings i did not mean to convey a message that is sexist what i mean is people too free today that most teens already having sex when they are in middle school atleast in my country that is so sorry if this offended anyone and plss forgive me for my rudeness

Dude I'm make and I have no idea what you're on about

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What i mean is that the teens this days are free and curious so because of puberty thier libido goes up and they have sex and thats most girls i know from exp im a **** too

Dude I'm not the guy who you started this convo with I already agreed with you

Yeah, your right about that. I'm still a virigin I'm like still 14, you know. Well, on how I portray the story is not like what that guy said above, saying that a girl is not a virgin, they are slut. Most of the Characters are virign because in my own perspective it just feels weird having married someone who already got ****ed by others, that guy may very well said 'Oh! That guy's wife? I have already seen and tasted every inch of her body' And so who wouldn't feel weird about that. But I'm okay having girlfriends not being a virgin as long as in the long way you won't marry her. In this story I was thinking about marriage up ahead so I let them be a virgin

Yeah, your right about that. I'm still a virigin I'm like still 14, you know. Well, on how I portray the story is not like what that guy said above, saying that a girl is not a virgin, they are slut. Most of the Characters are virign because in my own perspective it just feels weird having married someone who already got ****ed by others, that guy may very well said 'Oh! That guy's wife? I have already seen and tasted every inch of her body' And so who wouldn't feel weird about that. But I'm okay having girlfriends not being a virgin as long as in the long way you won't marry her. In this story I was thinking about marriage up ahead so I let them be a virgin

Man I felt the same as you before, but then I just skipped through the prologue and I'm glad I did. If the prologue was a 5/100 then chapter 1 and the early chapters was like 55/100, then on it became a 75/100. So it is actually good you just didn't give it a fair chance. Honestly though even once you hit Chapter 1 there is a dramatic rise in quality. Don't knock it until you actually try it.

at least edit the fucking synopsis so the english isnt as **** as it is now

Creo estar completamente seguro de una cosa y es que todo lector profesional algún día se convierte en escritor. Y en mi humilde opinión personal, no creo que una novela pueda ser criticada por la escritura y faltas ortográficas, porque eso puede mejorarse fácilmente en el futuro. Lo único considerado difícil, es eliminar la pereza con la que un escritor primerizo entra en contacto al iniciar. En fin, mi intención es transmitir que, criticar a alguien que se esfuerza por escribir sus fantasías en una novela, es muestra de inferioridad. ¡Adiós!

People who do this to reviews blow my mind i swear you do know what a review is right?

Tata good one though