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FlowerOfEternity
FlowerOfEternityLv44yr
2020-09-09 17:37

Writing Quality: Amazing. There are almost NO grammatical errors from my perspective. (English is my second language so...) Stability of Updates: Really good, 2 chapters of intriguing and extremely interesting chapters a day. Story Development: Sometimes it's fast, sometimes it's slow, depending on the universe Grandpa is in, but I like it! Character Design: Honestly I love 'em all. Especially Grandpa Universe. Gosh, he's so god damn nice it just sometimes makes my heart melt. But, of course, he still knows how to be ruthless when it comes to it. World Background: Although a lot of things change with the involvement of Grandpa, I like every way it has changed up to this point. And a heads up to those that don't like wish fulfillment, cuz this is kind of that. So if you don't like it, don't read it and don't complain about it. But honestly, this is probably my favorite fanfiction of all time. I absolutely love every god damn thing about it, and I sometimes wish that there were more chapters released every day. But, I can't get too greedy, now can I? Either way, all I can say is, I god damn recommend this. It is so good!

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DaoistJaChq2
DaoistJaChq2Lv3

as a native english speaker i rate it 8 out of ten and most brits type mistakes anyway so its top wuality suff

DaoistwAQSDt
DaoistwAQSDtLv1

Hello, I'm wondering on which chapter did saitama or the world of vanpachmen first appear?

Cursed_sin
Cursed_sinLv12

Is there any romance?

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