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I've so far thoroughly enjoyed the fanfiction, however one major problem that the author has, seems to be to keep the names consistent, which leads me to suspect that the author either partially uses AI to write the story or to fix their grammar / writing mistakes. An example of this is the MC's AI companion that suddenly went from being named "Yarbis" to "Jarvis" for multiple chapters before it went back to Yarbis again. Furthermore the fusion between the the MC and her Pearl is established as "Kyanite", and only a chapter or two later it's spelled "Cyanite". This is still an enjoyable story but inconsistencies like this really ruins the immersion for me.
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Imo there's no limit to human cruelty.
Looks promising so far. Hopefully you can keep posting chapters 👍
Yeah, it's Old Norse for bear
If this is not given more chapters, I will be very sad :( Even though I don't know much about the SCP-universe, the premise is incredibly promising, and it wouldn't do this crossover justice to leave it with only 1 or 2 chapters (even though it was meant to be a one-shot). I hope the author would be willing to continue this! 4.8 stars from me with how the story is going so far.
I don't care what anyone says, this is gold. I have never found a Breaking Bad fanfiction that I actually liked, but this is so fucking good. I would recommend this 10/10 times with how the story is so far. PS: If some of you guys could recommend some good Breaking Bad fanfictions, then I'd be stoked.
I just wanna say that I absolutely love the concept. It's so far well executed, and the only complaints I have are the frequency of updates and some minor spelling errors. Nothing much. Keep up the good work Author!
Thank you! ☺️