Review Detail of MokouFriedChicken in The Days When I’m With You

This is very well written. Dialogue is fairly realistic and the story threatened to suck me in, even though I'm not really that big in the Romance genre(even though I'm writing one myself :p) This has a lot of promise, and besides minor grammatical inconsistencies that a proper beta can fix, I'd honestly say that I'll be watching this intently.