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Bob_Doe_0125
Bob_Doe_0125Lv154yr
2020-09-25 17:00

I couldn't get past the first paragraph this needs an editor badly! It seems like a poorly translated story or written by someone with english as a second language.

R-rated (+18) one short love story.

NightKiss
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19 Chs

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

MC is a man whore pervert....and chick is a whore [the way its written this is what it seems like]....read chp one para 1.....character devolopment is non existent, the idea is truly wonderful but the characters and writing is garbage,....if you came cause you read the summary then leave, cause you will be disappointed

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Haley_Rigas
Haley_RigasLv3

So far so good.only problem I see is that it’s so short.wish there was more. But from what I did read it was very interesting and you can’t help but read further on.

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NingXui
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