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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv44yr
2020-04-07 17:14

MC is a man whore pervert....and chick is a whore [the way its written this is what it seems like]....read chp one para 1.....character devolopment is non existent, the idea is truly wonderful but the characters and writing is garbage,....if you came cause you read the summary then leave, cause you will be disappointed

R-rated (+18) one short love story.

NightKiss
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19 Chs

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50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

How are they whores ?

4yr
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

the way its written,,,,the people just met [literally] and just start fucking....now look even in real life, unless its a r.a.p.e or prostitute, some slut or pervert,,,,people talk and then you know, they build a relationship or become friends with benefits, or something happens,,,,this **** just rushes.....read half a chp and quit....stories summary and the first chp dont suit each other is what I am saying....totally different **** happens, you dont get some fluffy ****, or sweet romance, but just garbage............sorry if i am rude, but put a tag and better summary next time, readers dont get what they thought would be there [no offense.....to author.........//right now pretty pissed cause of some retarded author writing BS and trying to make excuses whilst denying it,,,come see the chat if ya want, its in my account, click my pic]

50ShadesOfAss:How are they whores ?
4yr
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50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

Yeah I tried a couple chapters and itโ€™s dumb af. I was expecting some light hearted romance ๐Ÿ˜ญ but first thing, some SluT girl gives a blow job to her teacher . Such crappy one shots

amaturewriter:the way its written,,,,the people just met [literally] and just start fucking....now look even in real life, unless its a r.a.p.e or prostitute, some slut or pervert,,,,people talk and then you know, they build a relationship or become friends with benefits, or something happens,,,,this **** just rushes.....read half a chp and quit....stories summary and the first chp dont suit each other is what I am saying....totally different **** happens, you dont get some fluffy ****, or sweet romance, but just garbage............sorry if i am rude, but put a tag and better summary next time, readers dont get what they thought would be there [no offense.....to author.........//right now pretty pissed cause of some retarded author writing BS and trying to make excuses whilst denying it,,,come see the chat if ya want, its in my account, click my pic]
4yr
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ASTARTE
ASTARTELv12

Maybe this is a Hentai? Like you know when you go watch some certain type of website

50ShadesOfAss:Yeah I tried a couple chapters and itโ€™s dumb af. I was expecting some light hearted romance ๐Ÿ˜ญ but first thing, some SluT girl gives a blow job to her teacher . Such crappy one shots
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Haley_Rigas
Haley_RigasLv3

So far so good.only problem I see is that itโ€™s so short.wish there was more. But from what I did read it was very interesting and you canโ€™t help but read further on.

4yr

Bob_Doe_0125
Bob_Doe_0125Lv15

I couldn't get past the first paragraph this needs an editor badly! It seems like a poorly translated story or written by someone with english as a second language.

4yr
NingXui
NingXuiLv12

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