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Shadewind
ShadewindLv65yr
2020-01-18 01:10

Don't like it at all. Mc is just a slave to women. He has no backbone at all. A disgusting personality I have to say. Beware mc is very submissive towards his women . He can't even argue with them. He just listen everything they say. And I don't this personality that's why I give it such a low rating.

Invincible System start from One Piece

adamsmith99
4.1
129 Chs

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