Item: Invincible System start from One Piece
Rating: 2.2
Author: The_Berserker

The_BerserkerLv54yr

2020-01-10 23:51

The story was good until he become nami slave she take all his Mony, order him aroud, +He suposed to be smart in his past life now become retard, his personality unbalanced, the mc don't any pride not some a strong pride but a man pride. (-_-)

Invincible System start from One Piece

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