The writing is okay but I have read a lot of one piece fanfic and this is just frustrating normally for me one piece gives me the feeling of excited for the next chapter but this book just means I'm fucking frustrated for the next chap and hope that doesn't happen but it does I love harem but at some point you get the idea that nami is the mc and pls don't say can't a bf listen to his gf cuz not how it works heck I even feel that nami owns the harem and he just a guy with dick meant to satisfy her aka boytoy even with her massocist tendencies just give nami a dick and I can bet you his harem can survive without him, it okay to give his women some screentime but your mistake was putting the mc as a side character the plot itself is one piece so its okay but this is trash among trash that's the fanfic its deserves
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You know there is something wrong when a harem lover doesn't like a harem story. π
hey bro ... can you give me a recommendation about the one piece fanfic that you think is the best and most memorable
