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aedwards_120Lv124yr
2020-07-25 11:08

It starts off pretty good but as it goes on the story just turns into a harem where 90% of it is about the MC sleeping with all her wives or going on dates with them or taking them out to fight monsters with him where he'll just end up sleeping with them. It's really annoying. I want more of her exploring dungeons/the world, conquering more land and getting stronger but it's just a slice of life harem.

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PancakesWitchAuthor

Well there is a r 18,harem and yuri tag, the story is slow phased but youre just missing the big events like wars, dungeon explorations and such. Later on it becomes about her takimg care of her chilf as well lol

Christian_ZanierLv1

MERRYSUE STORY NOW THEIR NO KARMA FOR THE HERO OR NO ONE DIE ,,LAME STORY

PancakesWitch:Well there is a r 18,harem and yuri tag, the story is slow phased but youre just missing the big events like wars, dungeon explorations and such. Later on it becomes about her takimg care of her chilf as well lol
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