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LOPHELIALv134yr
2020-10-16 22:42

Honestly. I love the concept but the start of the novel is rough. Dialogue screams chunnybu and tonnes of overly convenient scenarios happen one after another. That being said the novel does pick up ALOT after a while and the story becomes enjoyable when the side characters realize they aren't in a low quality shounen manga.

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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

Thanks,in which chapter are you btw?

Zim_Zimmerhanzel
Zim_ZimmerhanzelLv13

I love your work and I'm a big time reader. So happy you got the MC to be with his parted "member" from when he was a guy. So thankful you did that. You're a real MVP and OG bro. Can't express how much I love how you made the skills and how the MC was getting his girls preg and all that. You're a literal genius fam. Keep up the AMAZING work and I'll keep giving my power gems and sometimes coins. You're awesome bro.

PancakesWitch:Thanks,in which chapter are you btw?
Mechanicas
MechanicasLv1

From approx which chapter these characters stop their shounen behavior?

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