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50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv144yr
2020-01-16 13:58

Cool story and all. Long chapters and it’s very readable. I really like evolution novels with op mc but I had to leave once you made mc into a female and refer to him as a she. It’s just not my thing. Like what’s the point of having an ***** man reincarnate if he’s just gonna become a butterfly EMPRESS or QUEEN. Should’ve just made a women reincarnate but that’s just me. Good luck on the story

Epic of Caterpillar

PancakesWitch
4.9
2532 Chs

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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

Its fine, thanks for reading until now!

4yr
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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

I left after I realize this was going to be another generic monster kingdom building into becoming a genderbender god. It's like a knock off of tensei ****ara slime datta ken. Also the MC wasn't even a caterpillar for ten whole chapters so the title of this fic is misleading.

4yr
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YuuysukeYaja
YuuysukeYajaLv3

well, he(she) was a caterpillar, so the title is not wrong, and how do you want him to survive without getting stronger? a caterpillar is too weak to make a whole 20 or 30 chapters, and it is something like re:monster, not tensei ****ara slime datta ken.

David_Drake:I left after I realize this was going to be another generic monster kingdom building into becoming a genderbender god. It's like a knock off of tensei ****ara slime datta ken. Also the MC wasn't even a caterpillar for ten whole chapters so the title of this fic is misleading.
4yr
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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Was* Plus Re:Monster isn't that great. The way I would've wanted him to survive would be to use his system as a unique cheat in this world. No one else would have access to it and he'll easily become OP as a caterpillar. Anyone could write 20 to 30 chapters if the author did this and a few exceptional people could easily write further than that. However, being a genderbender butterfly is only one of the many problems I've saw in this fic. And besides if the author actually tried making the transition to becoming a 'normal' butterfly I would be all for it. But, he just had execute it poorly on purpose.

YuuysukeYaja:well, he(she) was a caterpillar, so the title is not wrong, and how do you want him to survive without getting stronger? a caterpillar is too weak to make a whole 20 or 30 chapters, and it is something like re:monster, not tensei ****ara slime datta ken.
4yr
YuuysukeYaja
YuuysukeYajaLv3

ok

David_Drake:Was* Plus Re:Monster isn't that great. The way I would've wanted him to survive would be to use his system as a unique cheat in this world. No one else would have access to it and he'll easily become OP as a caterpillar. Anyone could write 20 to 30 chapters if the author did this and a few exceptional people could easily write further than that. However, being a genderbender butterfly is only one of the many problems I've saw in this fic. And besides if the author actually tried making the transition to becoming a 'normal' butterfly I would be all for it. But, he just had execute it poorly on purpose.
4yr
2
YuuysukeYaja
YuuysukeYajaLv3

oh, I forgot to mention, I'll probably write some type of novel or fanfic based on alot of these novels, when I start to make them, I will ask some suggestions or tips for the novel/fanfic, you could help me out too.

David_Drake:Was* Plus Re:Monster isn't that great. The way I would've wanted him to survive would be to use his system as a unique cheat in this world. No one else would have access to it and he'll easily become OP as a caterpillar. Anyone could write 20 to 30 chapters if the author did this and a few exceptional people could easily write further than that. However, being a genderbender butterfly is only one of the many problems I've saw in this fic. And besides if the author actually tried making the transition to becoming a 'normal' butterfly I would be all for it. But, he just had execute it poorly on purpose.
4yr
1
David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Not really the right place to ask, but sure.

YuuysukeYaja:oh, I forgot to mention, I'll probably write some type of novel or fanfic based on alot of these novels, when I start to make them, I will ask some suggestions or tips for the novel/fanfic, you could help me out too.
4yr
PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

Hi im late to the party, I actually dont like the idea of a system being an unique thing of the MC, I've always liked it to be abused by everyone. I'm actually regretful over not leaving her as a caterpillar for longer, but its already long in the past. I actually love Re:Monster so its heavily inspired on it with a sprinkle of Tensei Shittara Slime and the Spider Isekia. I believe that I've created something enjoyable enough and Im always happy to write my novel and keep expanding the world, its like im the biggest fan of myself hahaha. I was even thinking on making a spin off were Kireina never was allowed to evolve and was stuck as a caterpillar, changing all the events heavily.

4yr
16
YuuysukeYaja
YuuysukeYajaLv3

It would be weird if she was a catterpilat forever... oh and spider isekai is kumo desu ga? Nani ka?

PancakesWitch:Hi im late to the party, I actually dont like the idea of a system being an unique thing of the MC, I've always liked it to be abused by everyone. I'm actually regretful over not leaving her as a caterpillar for longer, but its already long in the past. I actually love Re:Monster so its heavily inspired on it with a sprinkle of Tensei Shittara Slime and the Spider Isekia. I believe that I've created something enjoyable enough and Im always happy to write my novel and keep expanding the world, its like im the biggest fan of myself hahaha. I was even thinking on making a spin off were Kireina never was allowed to evolve and was stuck as a caterpillar, changing all the events heavily.
4yr
4
PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

Yeah it would be weird but interesting haha

YuuysukeYaja:It would be weird if she was a catterpilat forever... oh and spider isekai is kumo desu ga? Nani ka?
4yr
5
LaZYParagon
LaZYParagonLv15

Noooooo!!! 😂 😂 😂 Please keep going with this story and don't change anything, I just love it like that

PancakesWitch:Yeah it would be weird but interesting haha
4yr
3
Master4thWall
Master4thWallLv4

you know the reason I'm this Novel is also because of how he was a Man in his previous life and now that he is a female what he would do🤣🤣 how different we are

4yr
2
Body_Of_Breanna
Body_Of_BreannaLv14

Read the whole book before judging it. Im on chapter 108 so far it been a awesome book 📚

4yr
2
50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

I called it a good story but i dont like genderbenders 😑😑😑😑😑😑

Body_Of_Breanna:Read the whole book before judging it. Im on chapter 108 so far it been a awesome book 📚
4yr
9
JayScribe
JayScribeLv13

I like authors who are fan if themselves, as I am too. Write to enjoy and if others enjoy too, that's just a bonus. I love your energy.

PancakesWitch:Hi im late to the party, I actually dont like the idea of a system being an unique thing of the MC, I've always liked it to be abused by everyone. I'm actually regretful over not leaving her as a caterpillar for longer, but its already long in the past. I actually love Re:Monster so its heavily inspired on it with a sprinkle of Tensei Shittara Slime and the Spider Isekia. I believe that I've created something enjoyable enough and Im always happy to write my novel and keep expanding the world, its like im the biggest fan of myself hahaha. I was even thinking on making a spin off were Kireina never was allowed to evolve and was stuck as a caterpillar, changing all the events heavily.
7mth
2
Darkxion5455
Darkxion5455Lv14

please don't do that. if you want too change the story, give every creature a system and make MC's system able to devour other people's systems to get stronger and better skills/ abilities or evolution paths.

PancakesWitch:Hi im late to the party, I actually dont like the idea of a system being an unique thing of the MC, I've always liked it to be abused by everyone. I'm actually regretful over not leaving her as a caterpillar for longer, but its already long in the past. I actually love Re:Monster so its heavily inspired on it with a sprinkle of Tensei Shittara Slime and the Spider Isekia. I believe that I've created something enjoyable enough and Im always happy to write my novel and keep expanding the world, its like im the biggest fan of myself hahaha. I was even thinking on making a spin off were Kireina never was allowed to evolve and was stuck as a caterpillar, changing all the events heavily.
3mth
PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

the world of Genesis already has a system for everyone, it just a law of the world, later on Kireina creates her own upgraded system combining abilities from other systems she find

Darkxion5455:please don't do that. if you want too change the story, give every creature a system and make MC's system able to devour other people's systems to get stronger and better skills/ abilities or evolution paths.
3mth
1
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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthor

Another shameless author rating his webnovel with 5/5. Do you like weak to strong MC? Do you like contants struggles and almost impossible fights? Do you like Caterpillars? No? Thats fine! If you said yes to most of them or none, check out this novel, know about a very unfortunate otaku reincarnating into a caterpillar and being constantly toyed by a sick god. Experience his constant struggles to go on the top of the food chain, with a lot of ridiculous reactions and sick comedy, and a well developed and intrincating System!

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ottopayback
ottopaybackLv15

This book is great, while the genderbender protagonist at the beginning threw me off a little bit, the plot and action afterwards throughly captured my attention. Great fight scenes mixed with character growth (literally and emotionally). Also the authors naming sense for skills and monster is top notch. Love it.

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YuuysukeYaja
YuuysukeYajaLv3

THIS IS SOOO GOOD, I love the way you write, looking like re:monster, a novel that I love, congratulations for such a great novel, I hope you never drop it

4yr
Ellyejah_Angol
Ellyejah_AngolLv3

never seen such a unique novel the world of the novel grows at a good pace the worlds lore is interesting each chapter complements each other the authors implementation of the system was done very nicely BEST NOVEL SO FAR

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Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

there are to many loop holes in this story like how mc is to trusting and how his blessing effect can be shared to his subordinates its basically removing reason why he is unique tsk.

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Jazimo
JazimoLv6

The “Epic of Caterpillar” is the only novel written by its author (PancakesWitch) on Webnovel. The MC is a reincarnated human male who died because of a fever. And he was incarnated into a caterpillar! As a previous Otaku he managed to discover that there is a system in this new world. The system is actually in control of the world and its inhabitants. Through his new life the protagonist embarks on a journey to empower himself by evolving with the help of the system. Gaining many strong companions while establishing a kingdom. The novel is heavily influenced by Japanese isekai webnovels, anime, and manga. I’ve noticed many similarities between EOC and many Japanese isekai novels like “Re: Monster; Monster reincarnation chronicle starting after being stabbed to death” by (Kanekiru Kogitsune), “That Time I Got Reincarnated As A Slime” by (Fuse), “The Death Mage Who Doesn’t Want a Fourth Time” by (Densuke), and “I'm A Spider, So What?” by (Baba Okina). The novel main structure is based on the novel “Re: Monster”. The analogy between the MC’s (Kireina) and (Rou) is very much the same. Both are always levelling up, evolving and gaining skills through devouring others. Acquiring tons of followers and obtaining wives and children’s. Doing all of this while building and expanding their own monsters’ kingdom. The only difference is the gender bending happened to the MC. Still I could not figure out the reason behind it or will it be something crucial later on in the future of events. In general the novel has its ups and downs but still captivating and entertaining. I always looking for what next to the MC and all of her followers and wives. Also how far can she expand the kingdom and what will be unfold in the relation with the higher beings. And who is controlling the system

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LastEmailDeleted
LastEmailDeletedLv13

I understand that webnovel doesn’t have a very good system for gender bender novels, but since for most of the novel the mc is female, I think the book should be in the female lead category rather than the male lead one, though I’m not sure if it is possible for the author to change that after initially selecting the male lead option.

4yr
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LOPHELIALv13

Honestly. I love the concept but the start of the novel is rough. Dialogue screams chunnybu and tonnes of overly convenient scenarios happen one after another. That being said the novel does pick up ALOT after a while and the story becomes enjoyable when the side characters realize they aren't in a low quality shounen manga.

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