So, to start, if you are looking through the comments to find a review that properly explains why you should (or in this case) should not read this novel, go no further! I only went a few chapters in and already got a perfect feel for how the author writes, and it's not good. While it's probably true the authors primary language is not English that's no excuse for the complete lack of character development or any other development for that case, good writers will make each character feel alive with well thought out interactions between the Mc and said characters, and each character should have a unique personality. what this author does is just plain lazy, for example, when our Mc meets his mother all we get in terms of info is she is "tender" no proper interactions between the Mc and parent that would show any kind of proper character development, simply put we don't get any proper feeling of attachment to the mother instead all we get is pretty much "this is MCs parent she is colored white and a fox , looks at MC tenderly" then an instant time skip. long review short, MC never goes into detail about anything in the story it's just a monologue of an event happening with no further details. It might get better but that's unlikely, I really hope it does or perhaps even get a rewrite because I am interested in the premise, just not the current way the story is told.
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LIKEwhoops, looks like I said "MC" instead of the "Author" in the second last sentence, that's what I get for writing a review at 1:28am.
